Phân tích "More people are moving into mega-cities with 20 billion population. Is this the negative or positive development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 5/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "More people are moving into mega-cities with 20 billion population. Is this the negative or positive development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 5/11/2023)

More people are moving into mega-cities with 20 billion population. Is this the negative or positive development?

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau 

• NEGATIVE 
  • Main idea 1: High cost of living, including housing, transportation, and general expenses.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Big cities often have a high demand for housing due to population density and the concentration of job opportunities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "demand" tiếng anh
      • This demand can outpace the supply of affordable housing options, leading to increased prices and rental rates. 
      • Limited land availability for construction and zoning restrictions can further contribute to the high cost of housing.
    • Example: San Francisco is one of the most expensive cities in the world, and the cost of living is a major factor in this. The median rent for a one-bedroom apartment in San Francisco is over $3,000 per month, and the median home price is over $1 million. 
  • Main idea 2: Increased competition for jobs and resources.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Big cities often serve as economic hubs, attracting a large number of businesses and industries. >> IELTS TUTOR Paraphrase từ"industry"tiếng anh 
      • The concentration of job opportunities in these cities leads to a higher demand for employment, resulting in increased competition among job seekers. 
      • Industries such as finance, technology, media, and creative sectors tend to cluster in urban areas, intensifying the competition for positions in these sectors.
    • Example: Los Angeles is a major economic hub in the United States, and it is home to a large number of businesses and industries. The concentration of job opportunities in Los Angeles leads to a higher demand for employment, resulting in increased competition among job seekers. 

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