Phân tích"Most of the government funding should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and make progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Most of the government funding should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and make progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Most of the government funding should be invested in teaching science rather than any other subjects in order for a country to develop and make progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea:  it is wrong to assume that science has been the sole underlying source of progress   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng liên từ "assuming (that)" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The study of many other disciplines of education can also attribute to a countries progress
        • This can also help to improve the quality of people’s lives and therefore help towards a countries overall development.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng THEREFORE & HENCE trong tiếng anh
        • Aside from scientists, people from all backgrounds such as designers, marketers, and behavioural expert work together to turn an idea into reality
      • Example: 
        • Subjects such as History and Philosophy have allowed us to gain a better understanding of humanity and can help to gain more insight into how we can move forward as a race. 
        • Other subjects such as the Arts, allow societies and individuals to express themselves creatively through mediums such as music, film and other art forms  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "express" như danh từ, tính từ, trạng từ & động từ
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: undue attention paid to teaching science subjects creates imbalanced distribution of workforce  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"distribute"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This leads to the shortage of labour working in non-scientific fields such as lawyers, journalists and so on
      • Example: 
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác:
    • Main idea: Trained artists such as actors, singers, and musicians are vital in creating entertainment values that can satiate the society’s needs for happiness, avoiding depressions that can hamper growth. 
      • Supporting idea: For a country to advance sustainably, the government cannot neglect the values of non-science fields.
    • Main idea:  Excessive focus on education of science -> students may disregard other subjects -> incomprehensive knowledge  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "focus" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Literature, history, music and art are indispensable in the process to become well-rounded persons

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