Phân tích "Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing many health problems including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing, causing many health problems including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 There are several factors contributing to poor eating habits and the rise of health issues like obesity
    • Main idea 1: In today's fast-paced world, convenience often takes precedence over nutrition. 
      • Supporting idea: Fast food and processed snacks are readily available and require little preparation, making them attractive options for busy individuals. 
      • Example: A study published in the journal Appetite in 2017 found a direct correlation between increased availability of fast food outlets and higher body mass index (BMI) in surrounding communities 
    • Main idea 2:  Food companies heavily market unhealthy products, often targeting children and vulnerable populations. 
      • Supporting idea: This can influence people's food choices and consumption habits, leading to the overconsumption of sugary, fatty, and calorie-dense foods.
      • Example: A 2023 study by the Center for Science in the Public Interest (CSPI) revealed that sugary cereals marketed towards children contain an average of 50% more sugar per serving than adult cereals
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Making nutritious foods more accessible and affordable can encourage people to choose healthier options. 
      • Supporting idea: This can include initiatives such as subsidizing fruits and vegetables, promoting farmers' markets in underserved areas, and incentivizing grocery stores to carry a wider range of healthy products.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: The Los Angeles Fresh Rx Program provides vouchers for fresh fruits and vegetables to low-income residents, increasing access and affordability of nutritious food. By subsidizing produce and targeting farmers' markets, it encourages healthier eating habits in underserved communities, demonstrating the potential impact of similar initiatives aimed at improving food access.
    • Main idea 2: Implementing policies to regulate the marketing of unhealthy foods, especially to children, can help reduce their consumption. 
      • Supporting idea: This may involve restrictions on advertising certain products, implementing sugar or calorie taxes, or requiring clearer labeling of nutritional information.

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