Phân tích "Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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• Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
    • Main idea 1: video games are entertaining
      • Supporting idea: video games could help people in releasing their stress >> Players could feel the excitement of being a heroic character or a professional athlete. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "release" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: some video games are considered as educative
      • Supporting idea: they are created to trigger people's imaginative thinking
      • Example: Minecraft's educational potential shines through its block-based creativity, fostering problem-solving skills and facilitating learning across diverse subjects like science, math, and history through hands-on gameplay.
  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
    • Main idea 1: Excessive screen time can lead to a sedentary lifestyle, contributing to health issues such as obesity and related conditions.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Prolonged periods of sitting while watching television or playing video games can result in a significant reduction in physical activity. 
        • This lack of movement can lead to an imbalance between calorie intake and expenditure, ultimately contributing to obesity.
      • Example: A 2019 study published in the journal Pediatrics found that children who spent more than two hours per day watching TV or playing video games were more likely to be overweight or obese than children who spent less than two hours per day on these activities. 
    • Main idea 2: Spending too much time in front of screens can reduce face-to-face social interactions, potentially hindering the development of important social skills.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Interacting with screens rather than people can limit a child's ability to empathize with others. 
        • Empathy is a critical social skill that involves understanding and sharing the feelings of others, which is best learned through direct interpersonal interactions.
      • Example: A 2020 study published in the journal Nature Human Behaviour found that children who spent more than two hours per day watching TV or playing video games were more likely to have difficulty understanding and responding to the emotions of others. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)

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