Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích" Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Opinion essay
- Intro câu 2 & Conclusion thể hiện totally agree
- Body 1: Lí do số 1 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho (nên đưa lí do liên quan đến intellectual) - In terms of encouraging intellectual development and stimulating the intelligence of school children.
- Main idea: practical exercises and laboratory experiments significantly help increase their problem-solving, logical thinking, and reasoning abilities.
- Supporting idea:
- Example
- Body 2: Lí do số 2 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho (nên đưa lí do liên quan đến social development) - From the perspective of social development.
- Main idea: it is also at school where youngsters learn to interact with teachers.
- Supporting idea:
- Apart from their daily classroom interactions, varied extracurricular activities are likewise offered to them, depending on their interests >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Hobbies / Interests
- Students, especially young children, are highly sensitive to people’s behaviours around them. Therefore, when students are sent to school where they spend most of their time with their teachers, their development can be easily influenced by those teaching them.
- Example: For instance, by attending group work assignments or creative games organized by their teacher, not only can students hone their interpersonal skills, such as team work or communication, but they can also boost their different kinds of intelligence, like problem solving or logical thinking.
- Có thể tham khảo thêm các ý khác cùng IELTS TUTOR
- While not all teachers are capable of inspiring their students, they are trained to impart their knowledge of their subject areas in challenging and imaginative ways >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "subject" tiếng anh (danh từ, tính từ, động từ) >> Some students owe their lifelong love of a subject to dedicated teachers who taught this discipline in secondary school.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Once children begin formal schooling, many argue that teachers exert greater influence over their development than parents. This essay totally agrees with this viewpoint because educators shape children’s intellectual as well as social growth in profound ways.
In terms of intellectual development, teachers play a decisive role by exposing children to bolded vocab. First, classroom learning is deliberately structured to foster analytical abilities through bolded vocab. Practical exercises and laboratory experiments in subjects like science or mathematics strengthen students’ problem-solving capacity and sharpen their logical reasoning. For example, when learners engage in hands-on experiments, they acquire not only factual knowledge but also bolded vocab. Such carefully designed learning environments are often beyond what parents can offer at home, which further cements teachers’ authority over children’s cognitive advancement.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
From the perspective of social development, teachers likewise exert a substantial impact. School is typically the first environment where children learn to communicate, collaborate, and build relationships outside their families. They participate in extracurricular clubs, sports teams, and creative workshops, all of which are facilitated by teachers who serve as constant role models. Students, especially younger ones, are highly susceptible to the behaviours and attitudes of adults around them. Therefore, because children spend most of their waking hours at school, their social habits, interpersonal skills, and even moral values are shaped, whether consciously or unconsciously, by their teachers. For instance, through group-work activities guided by their teachers, students learn how to negotiate, share responsibilities, and refine communication strategies that contribute to both social confidence and intellectual growth.
In conclusion, I totally agree that teachers, more than parents, influence children’s intellectual and social development once they enter school.
NEW VOCABULARY LIST
1. profoundly – sâu sắc, một cách mạnh mẽ
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…teachers exert greater influence over their development… in profound ways.”
Synonyms: deeply, intensely, strongly
Antonyms: superficially, mildly, weakly
2. deliberately structured – được cấu trúc một cách có chủ đích
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “classroom learning is deliberately structured to foster analytical abilities…”
Synonyms: intentionally organised, purposefully arranged, carefully planned
Antonyms: randomly organised, accidentally arranged, haphazardly set up
3. hands-on – thực hành, mang tính trải nghiệm trực tiếp
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “when learners engage in hands-on experiments…”
Synonyms: experiential, practical, interactive
Antonyms: theoretical, abstract, distant
4. cognitive advancement – sự tiến bộ về nhận thức
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…which further cements teachers’ authority over children’s cognitive advancement.”
Synonyms: intellectual development, mental progress, cognitive growth
Antonyms: cognitive decline, intellectual stagnation, mental regression
5. exert a substantial impact – gây ảnh hưởng đáng kể
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “teachers likewise exert a substantial impact.”
Synonyms: strongly influence, significantly shape, greatly affect
Antonyms: barely influence, minimally affect, have little impact
6. highly susceptible – dễ bị ảnh hưởng, nhạy cảm
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Students… are highly susceptible to the behaviours…”
Synonyms: easily influenced, vulnerable, impressionable
Antonyms: resistant, immune, unaffected
7. interpersonal skills – kỹ năng giao tiếp & tương tác giữa người với người
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…students learn how to negotiate… and refine communication strategies…”
Synonyms: social skills, people skills, communication skills
Antonyms: isolation skills, non-social behaviour, poor communication
8. consciously or unconsciously – một cách có ý thức hoặc vô thức
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “their social habits… are shaped, whether consciously or unconsciously…”
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Antonyms: deliberately avoided, intentionally ignored, consciously resisted
9. cement authority – củng cố quyền lực/ảnh hưởng
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…further cements teachers’ authority over children’s cognitive advancement.”
Synonyms: strengthen influence, reinforce control, solidify authority
Antonyms: weaken authority, undermine control, diminish influence
10. susceptible to behaviours – dễ bị tác động bởi hành vi
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Students… are highly susceptible to the behaviours and attitudes of adults…”
Synonyms: easily affected by, open to influence from, prone to be shaped by
Antonyms: insusceptible, closed off, unaffected by
GRAMMAR STRUCTURES
1. Cleft sentence (emphasis)
Structure: It is… that/who…
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
“It is at school where children learn to communicate and collaborate.”
Vietnamese: Chính ở trường nơi trẻ học cách giao tiếp và hợp tác.
2. Complex relative clause
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
“…teachers, who serve as constant role models, shape students’ behaviours.”
Vietnamese: “…giáo viên, những người là tấm gương liên tục, định hình hành vi của học sinh.”
3. Subordinate clause of reason
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
“Because children spend most of their waking hours at school, their social habits are shaped by teachers.”
Vietnamese: Vì trẻ dành phần lớn thời gian thức ở trường, thói quen xã hội của chúng bị ảnh hưởng bởi giáo viên.
4. Reduced relative clause
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
“Students participating in group-work activities learn negotiation skills.”
Vietnamese: Học sinh tham gia các hoạt động nhóm học được kỹ năng đàm phán.
5. Parallel structure
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
“…to negotiate, share responsibilities, and refine communication strategies…”
Vietnamese: “…để đàm phán, chia sẻ trách nhiệm và trau dồi chiến lược giao tiếp…”
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