Phân tích "In some societies, the responsibility of mother differs from the responsibility of father. What is the reason for this? And what do you think of the parental issues in the future?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Writing,Task 2

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I. Đề bài

In some societies, the responsibility of mother differs from the responsibility of father. What is the reason for this? And what do you think of the parental issues in the future?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea: The difference in responsibilities between mothers and fathers in some societies can be attributed to a combination of cultural norms and gender roles that have evolved over time. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Cultural norms: 
            • Cultural norms vary from society to society, and these norms can influence the roles that mothers and fathers are expected to play. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "INFLUENCE" tiếng anh
            • For example, in some societies, mothers are expected to be the primary caregivers for children, while fathers are expected to be the breadwinners. In other societies, the roles of mothers and fathers are more egalitarian.
          • Gender roles: 
            • Gender roles are the social expectations that are placed on men and women. 
            • These roles can vary from society to society, and they can also change over time. In some societies, gender roles are very rigid, and there is a clear distinction between the roles of mothers and fathers. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "distinction" tiếng anh
            • In other societies, gender roles are more flexible, and there is more overlap between the roles of mothers and fathers.
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: Technology is becoming increasingly pervasive in our lives, and this is likely to have a significant impact on parenting. 
        • Supporting idea: They may also need to help their children develop healthy relationships with technology. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"develop"tiếng anh 
        • Example: For example, parents may need to be more vigilant about their children's screen time and the content they are exposed to. 
      • Main idea 2: The nature of work is also changing, and this is likely to have an impact on parenting. 
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: For example, more and more parents are working from home, which can make it difficult to balance work and family life. 
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Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0