Phân tích "Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 22/12/2022 & 9/10/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 22/12/2022 & 9/10/2023)

Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Free education results in the decrease in the illiteracy rate >> IELTS  TUTOR hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting  idea: 
        • Those who go to college will have more opportunity to find work, and they would be the future workforce for the nation
        • This would provide more skilled graduates for the current increasingly high-tech industries whose positions require employees of specialized knowledge and skill sets.
      • Example: Singapore government has  sponsored schooling fees for their youthful generation, which motivates them to visit universities or schools; this is why Singapore has a top qualified workforce leading to their development. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "motivate"
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: College education subsidies promote equality of opportunity, which means less privileged young citizens would have the same access to higher education as ones from better-endowed families. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Subsidies make college education more affordable by reducing tuition costs or providing financial aid, ensuring that students from lower-income backgrounds can access higher education without being burdened by excessive debt.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: The Pell Grant program in the United States, a vital source of financial aid for low-income students, has not only enabled millions of them to access higher education but has also been associated with higher graduation rates and increased post-graduation earnings, as demonstrated by a study from the National Center for Education Statistics.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is argued by some that governments ought to cover the entire tuition fees (toàn bộ học phí; synonyms: full cost, complete fees, total expenses; antonyms: partial payment, reduced fees, self-funded) for students pursuing higher education. I completely agree with this view because such a policy would both reduce the rate of illiteracy (nạn mù chữ; synonyms: ignorance, illiterateness, lack of education; antonyms: literacy, knowledge, education) and create equal access to opportunities for students from diverse backgrounds.

The first reason is that government-funded university education would lead to a significant decline in illiteracy rates. If young people are given the chance to attend college free of charge, they will have more opportunities to secure employment and subsequently contribute as the future workforce of the nation. This would provide a pool of skilled graduates (cử nhân có tay nghề; synonyms: trained professionals, competent workers, qualified alumni; antonyms: unqualified individuals, untrained workers, incompetent graduates) for industries that increasingly require specialized knowledge and expertise. For instance, the Singaporean government has sponsored (tài trợ; synonyms: funded, supported, financed; antonyms: withheld, deprived, ignored) higher education for its younger generation, motivating them to pursue universities, which in turn has resulted in one of the most highly-qualified workforces (lực lượng lao động có trình độ cao; synonyms: well-trained employees, expert staff, capable professionals; antonyms: unskilled workers, amateur staff, inexperienced employees) in the world.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, subsidizing higher education promotes equality of opportunity. By removing or reducing tuition costs, governments enable students from disadvantaged families to access universities without the burden of excessive debt (khoản nợ quá lớn; synonyms: heavy loan, overwhelming liability, unmanageable arrears; antonyms: financial freedom, solvency, surplus). This ensures that access to education is not limited to those from wealthy backgrounds. A prime example is the Pell Grant program in the United States, which provides financial aid to low-income students. According to a study from the National Center for Education Statistics, it has not only allowed millions of students to pursue higher education but also significantly improved graduation rates and post-graduation earnings.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that governments should shoulder full tuition fees because it reduces illiteracy while simultaneously ensuring equal educational opportunities for all.

New Vocabulary with Explanations

1. entire tuition fees = toàn bộ học phí

2. illiteracy = nạn mù chữ

3. skilled graduates = cử nhân có tay nghề

4. sponsored = tài trợ

5. highly-qualified workforce = lực lượng lao động có trình độ cao

6. excessive debt = khoản nợ quá lớn

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. If young people are given the chance to attend college free of charge, they will have more opportunities to secure employment

   • Type 1 conditional with passive voice → Nếu giới trẻ được trao cơ hội học đại học miễn phí, họ sẽ có nhiều cơ hội tìm việc.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

2. This would provide a pool of skilled graduates for industries that increasingly require specialized knowledge and expertise.

   • Relative clause "that increasingly require…" → Điều này sẽ tạo ra một nhóm sinh viên tốt nghiệp có tay nghề cho các ngành công nghiệp ngày càng đòi hỏi kiến thức và chuyên môn đặc biệt.

3. By removing or reducing tuition costs, governments enable students from disadvantaged families to access universities without the burden of excessive debt.

   • Prepositional phrase "By removing or reducing…" as adverbial clause of means → Bằng cách loại bỏ hoặc giảm chi phí học phí, chính phủ cho phép sinh viên từ các gia đình khó khăn tiếp cận đại học mà không phải gánh nặng nợ nần quá lớn.

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