Phân tích"Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

· Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Opinion essay
  • Intro câu 2 & Conclusion khẳng định quan điểm totally agree.
  • Body 1: Lí do 1 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho. 
    • Main idea: By learning local literature, young students can better understand and appreciate the history of where they were born >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "HISTORY" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Learning local literature allows young students to connect with the stories, traditions, and cultural heritage specific to their birthplace, enabling them to develop a sense of belonging and a more comprehensive understanding of the historical context in which they were raised.

      • Through these literary works, they can explore the struggles, triumphs, and values of their community, fostering a deeper appreciation for their roots and the significance of their local history.

    • Example: since all the poems about wars in ….are taught to the students, most of them are aware of how bloody the wars were and how important it is to stop the history from repeating itself.
  • Body 2: Lí do 2 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho. 
    • Main idea: literature works such as folktales, poems or stories help develop children’s patriotism
    • Supporting idea: This helps remind them that they have to make every possible effort in everything they do in order to contribute to the development of their country >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth 
    • Example: By studying ….., children have the chance to learn about how their ancestors went through various challenges and even sacrificed themselves for the independence of Vietnam. 

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