Phân tích & sửa đề"Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain" IELTS WRITING

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I. Đề bài

Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích


  • Nếu theo hướng ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 "films should have educational value" có thể tham khảo bố cục 2 đoạn thân bài như sau:
    • Body 1: viết về view 1, vì sao có người ủng hộ "the only purpose of films is to entertain"
      • Main idea: films and television programs are a part of the entertainment industry, and the purpose of this industry is for entertainment  
      • Supporting idea: After a long day at work or school, many people simply want to come home and sit in front of the TV to relax and be entertained. They may not have the energy or enthusiasm to sit and learn about something.
      • Example: some specific genres of movies like comedy can make people laugh and become elated, meaning that I films are true of great entertainment benefit.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "laugh" & Từ vựng topic "khiếu hài hước"
    • Body 2: viết về view 2 (nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này) & đưa ra lí do vì sao"films should have educational value"  
      • Main idea 1: films and TV programs can have very strong effects on the minds of audiences and therefore people should be careful about how the contents of the films that they watch affect them and their families.
        • Supporting idea 1: many people’s morals and values are shaped by what they watch on TV and in films.
        • Example 1: children can learn about right and wrong through the cartoons they watch, while adults can also learn many important lessons through watching films.
        • Example 2: Watching a film about war may cause people to have a strong sense of patriotism for their country which could be seen as a positive educational effect.
      • Main idea 2:  Some others have watched films to learn about the culture and ways of life of other places on Earth 
        • Supporting idea 2: Viewers have been using films to learn foreign languages, in a sense that listening to people conversing in a film is a great way to hear native actors and actresses speaking their language. 
        • Example 2: 

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