Phân tích"Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some other people have not benefited from; to what extend do you agree or disagree"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 11/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some other people have not benefited from; to what extend do you agree or disagree."IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 11/12/2022)

Some people have benefited from modern communications technology, but some other people have not benefited from; to what extend do you agree or disagree

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• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY NEGATIVE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY NEGATIVE
    • Main idea: Digital communication tools often interferes with the bonding time that people share and thus has a negative influence on interpersonal relationships.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ interfere trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
        • For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socialising time for mobile game playing time, which would be likely to cause friends to drift apart in the long term  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng cụm từ (phrase) tiếng anh
        • There are many real examples of couples on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social network applications on mobile phones, and they find it hard to maintain a sense of intimacy.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY NEGATIVE
    • Main idea: Modern communication technology discourages direct communication, and this will enhance invisible distance among people 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because we no longer have to visit others to get updates  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "update ...
        • The young prefer making friends online rather than mixing themselves in the real world
        • “Virtual” relationships are poor alternative / substitute for real ones
      • Example: 

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