Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích vocab

Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses?

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, a growing number of individuals have chosen to curb✱ (EN: reduce; VI: cắt giảm) their air travel due to concerns about climate change. While this shift brings substantial environmental dividends✱ (EN: significant environmental benefits; VI: lợi ích môi trường đáng kể), I believe its drawbacks for personal convenience and business operations are not entirely negligible✱ (EN: cannot be ignored; VI: không thể bỏ qua).

On the one hand, the reduction in flights undoubtedly helps to mitigate climate change. Airplanes are among the most carbon-intensive✱ (EN: producing high levels of carbon emissions; VI: phát thải carbon cao) modes of transport, and frequent flying significantly contributes to global warming. By flying less, individuals are playing their part in shrinking✱ (EN: reducing; VI: thu hẹp) their carbon footprint✱ (EN: total greenhouse gas emissions; VI: dấu chân carbon). Moreover, this behavioral shift may encourage airlines to invest in greener alternatives✱ (EN: more environmentally friendly solutions; VI: giải pháp thân thiện hơn với môi trường), such as biofuels or electric aircraft, fostering long-term sustainability in the aviation sector.

However, the implications for individuals and businesses can be quite disruptive. For many professionals, especially those in client-facing✱ (EN: involving direct interaction with customers; VI: tiếp xúc trực tiếp với khách hàng) roles, frequent travel is essential for nurturing✱ (EN: developing; VI: nuôi dưỡng) business relationships. Limiting flights might hinder cross-border✱ (EN: between countries; VI: xuyên biên giới) collaboration, leading to missed opportunities and reduced competitiveness✱ (EN: decreased ability to compete; VI: giảm khả năng cạnh tranh). On a personal level, travel also serves as a means of emotional reconnection✱ (EN: renewing contact; VI: kết nối lại) for those with families abroad, and restricting it may cause emotional distress or long-distance estrangement✱ (EN: emotional distance due to physical separation; VI: xa cách do khoảng cách địa lý).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

In conclusion, while reducing air travel yields clear environmental gains, the trade-offs✱ (EN: compromises; VI: đánh đổi) for individuals and businesses mean that its benefits do not entirely outweigh the costs.

✦ New Vocabulary with Synonyms, Antonyms, and Examples

1. curb (reduce; VI: cắt giảm)

   • Synonyms: restrain, limit, restrict

   • Antonyms: increase, intensify, accelerate

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "individuals have chosen to curb their air travel..."

2. substantial environmental dividends (significant environmental benefits; VI: lợi ích môi trường đáng kể)

   • Synonyms: major benefits, significant gains, huge advantages

   • Antonyms: minor effects, negligible returns, slight improvements

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "this shift brings substantial environmental dividends"

3. not entirely negligible (cannot be ignored; VI: không thể bỏ qua)

   • Synonyms: noticeable, considerable, non-trivial

   • Antonyms: insignificant, minimal, trivial

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "its drawbacks for personal convenience... are not entirely negligible"

4. carbon-intensive (producing high levels of carbon emissions; VI: phát thải carbon cao)

   • Synonyms: polluting, emission-heavy, environmentally harmful

   • Antonyms: eco-friendly, sustainable, green

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Airplanes are among the most carbon-intensive modes of transport"

5. carbon footprint (total greenhouse gas emissions; VI: dấu chân carbon)

   • Synonyms: environmental impact, emissions level, ecological footprint

   • Antonyms: carbon neutrality, zero emissions, sustainable footprint

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "shrinking their carbon footprint">> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

6. greener alternatives (more environmentally friendly solutions; VI: giải pháp thân thiện hơn với môi trường)

   • Synonyms: sustainable options, eco-conscious methods, clean alternatives

   • Antonyms: polluting methods, harmful practices, dirty energy

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "invest in greener alternatives"

7. client-facing (involving direct interaction with customers; VI: tiếp xúc trực tiếp với khách hàng)

   • Synonyms: customer-oriented, customer-facing, service-based

   • Antonyms: back-office, internal-facing, administrative

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "especially those in client-facing roles"

8. reduced competitiveness (decreased ability to compete; VI: giảm khả năng cạnh tranh)

   • Synonyms: declining advantage, weakened position, lower performance

   • Antonyms: increased competitiveness, leading position, strong edge

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "leading to missed opportunities and reduced competitiveness"

9. reconnection (renewing contact; VI: kết nối lại)

   • Synonyms: reuniting, reunion, restoration of ties

   • Antonyms: disconnection, separation, detachment

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "travel also serves as a means of emotional reconnection"

10. trade-offs (compromises; VI: đánh đổi)

• Synonyms: balancing act, concessions, compromises

• Antonyms: win-win, advantages only, no-loss decisions

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the trade-offs for individuals and businesses"

✦ Advanced Grammar Structures

1. Cleft sentence for emphasis

   • Original: "it is the environmental benefits that are often highlighted..."

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "its drawbacks... are not entirely negligible"

   • Translation: “Những bất lợi của điều này... không hoàn toàn có thể bỏ qua được.”
     → Nhấn mạnh vào điều ngược lại với lợi ích môi trường.

2. Inversion for emphasis

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Only by reducing air travel can individuals significantly lower their carbon footprint.”

   • Translation: “Chỉ bằng cách giảm đi lại bằng đường hàng không thì cá nhân mới có thể cắt giảm đáng kể dấu chân carbon.”

3. Reduced relative clause

   • Original: “individuals who are flying less” → “individuals flying less”

   • Translation: “những cá nhân giảm tần suất bay”

4. Complex compound sentences

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Moreover, this behavioral shift may encourage airlines to invest in greener alternatives, such as biofuels or electric aircraft, fostering long-term sustainability in the aviation sector.”

   • Translation: “Hơn nữa, sự thay đổi hành vi này có thể khuyến khích các hãng hàng không đầu tư vào giải pháp xanh hơn, như nhiên liệu sinh học hoặc máy bay điện, từ đó thúc đẩy sự bền vững lâu dài trong ngành hàng không.”

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