Giải đề"Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 
      • Main idea: Those advocating against the need for handwriting skills argue that in today's digital age, typing and other technological tools have largely replaced the need for handwriting. 
        • Supporting idea: They argue that as communication and documentation increasingly shift to digital platforms, the emphasis on handwriting skills becomes less critical in everyday life.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
        • Example: In the past, students were required to take handwritten notes in class. Today, many students use laptops or tablets to take notes. This allows students to type their notes, which is faster and more efficient than writing them by hand. Additionally, students can easily share their notes with other students and teachers electronically.
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: When children learn to write clearly and concisely, they can learn how to express themselves properly. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "express" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: Imagine a student who writes exceptional essays, expressing intricate ideas clearly. This skill isn't limited to academics; it helps them communicate effectively in social interactions, contributing meaningfully to discussions and fostering better relationships through clear expression of emotions and opinions.
      • Main idea: Children are required to use handwriting daily in school, and those who struggle with handwriting may have trouble taking notes or completing their schoolwork.
        • Supporting idea: This leads to poorer academic and professional performance
        • Example: Imagine a student grappling with handwriting difficulties, impacting their note-taking during classes, potentially hindering their ability to keep pace with the lesson and accurately transcribe information. This obstacle in capturing information might impede their academic performance, affecting their comprehension and revision of course materials

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In the era of technological advancement, some people contend that handwriting has become obsolete due to the prevalence (sự phổ biến) of digital tools. However, others argue that cultivating this traditional skill remains essential for cognitive and communicative development.

Those who argue against the necessity of handwriting claim that modern technology has superseded (thay thế) the traditional way of writing. As communication and documentation have migrated to digital platforms, the reliance (sự phụ thuộc) on handwriting has dwindled (giảm dần) in daily life. For example, in the past, students were obliged to take handwritten notes during lectures, while today, laptops and tablets have become their primary tools. Typing is not only faster and more efficient but also allows students to store (lưu trữ), edit (chỉnh sửa), and share (chia sẻ) their notes effortlessly. Moreover, workplaces now prioritize digital correspondence, such as emails and online reports, further reducing the need for handwritten communication. Therefore, handwriting is perceived by many as a redundant (thừa thãi) skill in a world driven by innovation and speed.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR     

However, I strongly believe that handwriting remains a cornerstone (nền tảng vững chắc) of education and personal expression. When children learn to write clearly and concisely, they enhance their ability to articulate (diễn đạt) their ideas with precision and confidence. Mastering handwriting fosters mental discipline (kỷ luật tinh thần) and aids memory retention, which typing cannot fully replicate. For instance, a student who crafts well-written essays expressing intricate ideas shows not only linguistic ability but also cognitive organization. Furthermore, in classrooms, students who struggle with handwriting may find it challenging to keep up with lessons or complete written tasks, leading to weaker academic outcomes. Imagine a learner grappling with handwriting difficulties — their inability to transcribe notes swiftly can hinder comprehension and revision, eventually affecting both their academic and professional performance.

In conclusion, while technology has revolutionized communication, handwriting continues to play an indispensable role in nurturing cognitive growth and effective expression.

✨ Difficult Grammar Structures and Explanations

  1. “Those who argue against the necessity of handwriting claim that modern technology has superseded the traditional way of writing.”
    Cấu trúc “Those who + V + claim that + clause” (những người mà… cho rằng…)
    🟢 Dịch: Những người phản đối sự cần thiết của việc viết tay cho rằng công nghệ hiện đại đã thay thế cách viết truyền thống.

  2. “As communication and documentation have migrated to digital platforms, the reliance on handwriting has dwindled in daily life.”
    Mệnh đề trạng ngữ chỉ nguyên nhân “As + clause”
    🟢 Dịch: Khi giao tiếp và ghi chép chuyển sang nền tảng kỹ thuật số, sự phụ thuộc vào viết tay đã giảm dần trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

  3. “When children learn to write clearly and concisely, they enhance their ability to articulate their ideas with precision and confidence.”
    Mệnh đề điều kiện loại 1: “When + present simple, + present simple”
    🟢 Dịch: Khi trẻ học viết rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, chúng cải thiện khả năng diễn đạt ý tưởng chính xác và tự tin.

  4. “Mastering handwriting fosters mental discipline and aids memory retention, which typing cannot fully replicate.”
    Mệnh đề quan hệ “which typing cannot fully replicate” bổ nghĩa cho toàn mệnh đề trước đó.
    🟢 Dịch: Việc thành thạo viết tay thúc đẩy kỷ luật tinh thần và hỗ trợ ghi nhớ, điều mà việc gõ phím không thể hoàn toàn tái tạo được.

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