Phân tích "Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 25/9/2023) - Bài mẫu + giải thích vocab

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 25/9/2023)

Some people think hosting a major international sport event brings a lot of advantages. But some people think it only has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some people think it is bad
    • Main idea 1:  the process of preparing for these events is often demanding
      • Supporting idea: 
        • the host country’s government tends to embark on infrastructure splurge, which takes a toll on national funding, especially in developing countries.
        • The government’s desire to build edifices such as big arenas or racing circuits can incur a huge amount of debts, putting the country in economic difficulties afterwards. 
        • Therefore, spending lavishly on a short-lived event can be a dubious strategy. 
      • Example: For the World Cup 2014, it took Brazil five years to revitalise its cities and construct various facilities including stadiums and indoor athletics arenas to meet the world-class standard set by FIFA. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: Since a lot of people will be visiting the country during such events, untoward incidents like terror attacks could happen >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "happen" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: records have shown that there is a twofold increase in crimes such as prostitution and petty theft when a country organises an event such as the World Cup or the Olympics.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm hosting an international sports event is good for the country & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: international sporting games can potentially stimulate the tourism sector
      • Supporting idea: it is a great chance for the host nations to promote their culture on a global stage.
      • Example: For example, since the pictures of beautifully garnished Vietnamese dishes made headlines during the SEA Games in 2003, Vietnam has been branded as the “Kitchen of the world” and a must visit destination for global food lovers.
    • Main idea 2: International sports events are ideal occasions for hosting countries to enhance their dignity >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh & tính từ "ideal" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It can be conceded that major events are likely to draw global attention to the hosting nations which is a golden prospect for them to promote cultures and traditions. 
      • Example: A prime example is Beijing, the capital of China, which successfully took advantage of the 2008 Olympics to acquire a high reputation.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some argue that hosting a major international sporting event brings various drawbacks, while others believe it offers numerous benefits. This essay will examine both sides before expressing my firm support for the latter view.

Critics of such events highlight the financially-draining (EN: costing a lot of money; VN: tiêu tốn tài chính) nature of hosting, especially in less developed nations. These governments often embark on (EN: begin something important; VN: bắt đầu một việc gì đó lớn lao) a massive infrastructure splurge (EN: excessive spending on buildings and services; VN: sự chi tiêu ồ ạt vào cơ sở hạ tầng) to prepare for the event, which can take a toll on (EN: have a negative effect on; VN: gây thiệt hại cho) national budgets. Spending lavishly (EN: spending a lot; VN: chi tiêu hoang phí) on short-lived (EN: lasting a short time; VN: ngắn hạn) events may become a dubious strategy (EN: a plan that may be risky or questionable; VN: chiến lược đáng ngờ). For example, Brazil invested heavily to revitalise (EN: bring new life to; VN: hồi sinh, tái tạo) cities and construct (EN: build; VN: xây dựng) world-class venues for the 2014 World Cup, but many of those facilities were abandoned after the event. Furthermore, such events attract large crowds, raising the risk of untoward incidents (EN: unexpected and unfortunate events; VN: sự cố không mong muốn) such as terrorism or crime. Statistics often reveal a twofold increase (EN: double the amount; VN: tăng gấp đôi) in petty theft (EN: minor theft; VN: trộm vặt) and prostitution (EN: selling sex for money; VN: mại dâm) during such times.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I firmly believe that hosting international sports events is highly beneficial. Firstly, it significantly boosts the tourism sector (EN: industry related to tourists; VN: ngành du lịch) and provides an opportunity to promote national culture globally. For instance, after pictures of beautifully garnished (EN: attractively decorated; VN: được trang trí đẹp mắt) Vietnamese dishes went viral during the 2003 SEA Games, Vietnam was dubbed “The Kitchen of the World.” Secondly, it helps enhance national dignity (EN: improve the country’s pride and image; VN: nâng cao danh dự quốc gia). Events like the Olympics or World Cup attract global media attention, giving host countries a platform to showcase (EN: display prominently; VN: trình diễn) their culture and values. A prime example is Beijing, which leveraged the 2008 Olympics to cement its status as a global powerhouse.

In conclusion, despite several drawbacks, I believe that hosting major international sporting events brings far-reaching and lasting advantages for any nation.

🔍 New Vocabulary with Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Financially-draining (tốn kém về tài chính)

   • Synonyms: costly, expensive, high-priced

   • Antonyms: affordable, low-cost, economical

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Critics highlight the financially-draining nature of hosting...

2. Embark on (bắt đầu cái gì lớn lao)

   • Synonyms: undertake, initiate, commence

   • Antonyms: halt, quit, abandon

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Governments often embark on infrastructure splurge...

3. Infrastructure splurge (chi tiêu nhiều cho hạ tầng)

   • Synonyms: capital expenditure, public works, infrastructural investment

   • Antonyms: spending cuts, austerity, budget control

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: A massive infrastructure splurge to prepare...

4. Take a toll on (gây ảnh hưởng tiêu cực)

   • Synonyms: damage, harm, burden

   • Antonyms: benefit, aid, improve

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Which can take a toll on national budgets...

5. Dubious strategy (chiến lược đáng ngờ, rủi ro)

   • Synonyms: risky plan, questionable tactic, unsound policy

   • Antonyms: sound decision, wise strategy, safe approach

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Spending lavishly...can be a dubious strategy.

6. Revitalise (tái tạo, hồi sinh)

   • Synonyms: rejuvenate, renew, regenerate

   • Antonyms: ruin, degrade, deteriorate

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Brazil invested heavily to revitalise cities...

7. Untoward incidents (sự cố không mong muốn)

   • Synonyms: misfortune, setback, accident

   • Antonyms: success, triumph, opportunity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Raising the risk of untoward incidents...

8. Petty theft (trộm vặt)

   • Synonyms: larceny, shoplifting, pilfering

   • Antonyms: honesty, integrity, uprightness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Reveal a twofold increase in petty theft...

9. Tourism sector (ngành du lịch)

   • Synonyms: travel industry, hospitality industry, vacation trade

   • Antonyms: manufacturing, agriculture, construction

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Boosts the tourism sector...

10. Enhance national dignity (nâng cao danh dự quốc gia)

• Synonyms: elevate reputation, increase prestige, boost pride

• Antonyms: tarnish image, degrade status, diminish respect

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Helps enhance national dignity...

🔎 Difficult Grammar Structures + Vietnamese Translation

1. Critics of such events highlight the financially-draining nature of hosting...
   → Mệnh đề danh từ làm tân ngữ: “the financially-draining nature of hosting”
   → Những người phản đối các sự kiện như vậy nhấn mạnh bản chất tiêu tốn tài chính của việc đăng cai...

2. Spending lavishly on a short-lived event may become a dubious strategy.
   → Cấu trúc: V-ing làm chủ ngữ + Modal verb + động từ nguyên mẫu
   → Việc chi tiêu hoang phí cho một sự kiện ngắn hạn có thể trở thành một chiến lược đáng ngờ.

3. Events like the Olympics attract global media attention, giving host countries a platform to showcase their culture.
   → Cấu trúc mệnh đề rút gọn: “giving...” (mang nghĩa nguyên nhân – vì thế mà...)
   → Những sự kiện như Thế vận hội thu hút sự chú ý toàn cầu, vì thế tạo cơ hội cho nước chủ nhà trình diễn văn hóa của mình.

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