Phân tích"Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS Việt Nam 3/12/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm”Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings”
    • Main idea 1: They want to flaunt their wealth.
      • Supporting idea: Weddings and events are a good platform to show off their designer clothes, jewellery and makeup.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích phrasal verb: show off
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: People these days organise such functions to grab attention on social media in the form of likes and comments.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
      • Main idea: Marriage is once in a lifetime event; therefore, people spend lavishly to make it a special and memorable moment.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "expensive" IELTS SPEAKING & WRITING
      • Supporting idea: These weddings bring all family members, friends and relatives at one place, so they can get an opportunity to spend some quality time together with lots of fun and enjoyment.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”others think it is waste of money” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: leads to a financial burden on the host family  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a tradition of grand marriages puts a burden on the people who are not affluent financially)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • There have been several instances of people taking personal loans just to impress the society.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: People not only spend their lifelong savings on these weddings but also borrow lofty loans just to impress the society)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "instance" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: creates a sense of competition among the relatives to organise a better celebration for their loved ones.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 

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