Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion."IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings while others think it is waste of money. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm”Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings”
- Main idea 1: They want to flaunt their wealth.
- Supporting idea: Weddings and events are a good platform to show off their designer clothes, jewellery and makeup. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải thích phrasal verb: show off
- Example:
- Main idea 2: People these days organise such functions to grab attention on social media in the form of likes and comments.
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- IELTS TUTOR gợi ý main idea khác:
- Main idea: Marriage is once in a lifetime event; therefore, people spend lavishly to make it a special and memorable moment. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase "expensive" IELTS SPEAKING & WRITING
- Supporting idea: These weddings bring all family members, friends and relatives at one place, so they can get an opportunity to spend some quality time together with lots of fun and enjoyment.
- Main idea 1: They want to flaunt their wealth.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”others think it is waste of money” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: leads to a financial burden on the host family (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a tradition of grand marriages puts a burden on the people who are not affluent financially)
- Supporting idea:
- There have been several instances of people taking personal loans just to impress the society. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: People not only spend their lifelong savings on these weddings but also borrow lofty loans just to impress the society) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "instance" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: creates a sense of competition among the relatives to organise a better celebration for their loved ones.
- Supporting idea:
- Example:
- Main idea 1: leads to a financial burden on the host family (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: a tradition of grand marriages puts a burden on the people who are not affluent financially)
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm”Some people think it is important spending a lot of money on family celebrations such as birthday and weddings”
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