Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them, others think education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them, others think education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Some people argue that imprisoning offenders is an effective way to address crime, whereas others believe that education and vocational training are more beneficial. I totally disagree with the latter view, as prison plays a crucial role (crucial role – vai trò then chốt / an extremely important function) in maintaining public safety and deterring criminal behavior.
The primary reason why education cannot replace imprisonment is that prisons are designed to incapacitate offenders (incapacitate offenders – vô hiệu hóa tội phạm / prevent criminals from causing further harm), thereby safeguarding society. Individuals who have violated the law, particularly those guilty of heinous crimes (heinous crimes – tội ác ghê rợn / extremely evil criminal acts), pose a serious threat to the public if left at liberty. By keeping such criminals behind bars (behind bars – ở trong tù / imprisoned), governments can ensure that innocent citizens are protected from further violence. For instance, serial killers or political terrorists, who show no signs of rehabilitation, should receive life sentences so that law-abiding citizens (law-abiding citizens – công dân tuân thủ pháp luật / people who obey the law) can live without fear.
Another compelling reason is that strict prison sentences act as a powerful crime deterrent (crime deterrent – biện pháp răn đe tội phạm / something that discourages crime). The prospect of being arrested, losing personal freedom, and enduring a miserable existence (miserable existence – cuộc sống khốn khổ / extremely unhappy life) in a confined cell can discourage potential offenders from engaging in illegal activities. When individuals realize that criminal acts may result in years of incarceration, they are more likely to reconsider and refrain from going down the path of crime (going down the path of crime – dấn thân vào con đường phạm pháp / start committing crimes). For example, severe penalties for drug trafficking have significantly reduced crime rates in several countries.
In conclusion, prison sentences are indispensable because they both protect society and discourage criminal intentions, making them more effective than education alone.
New Vocabulary List
crucial role – vai trò then chốt
Synonyms: vital function, key role, essential purpose
Antonyms: minor role, trivial function, insignificance
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Prison plays a crucial role in maintaining public safety.incapacitate offenders – vô hiệu hóa tội phạm
Synonyms: restrain criminals, neutralize offenders, disable lawbreakers
Antonyms: release offenders, empower criminals, free suspects
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Prisons incapacitate offenders, thereby safeguarding society.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTORheinous crimes – tội ác ghê rợn
Synonyms: atrocious acts, brutal offenses, barbaric crimes
Antonyms: minor offenses, petty crimes, misdemeanors
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Those guilty of heinous crimes must be imprisoned.crime deterrent – biện pháp răn đe tội phạm
Synonyms: preventive measure, discouraging factor, restraining force
Antonyms: crime incentive, encouragement, motivation
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Harsh punishment is an effective crime deterrent.miserable existence – cuộc sống khốn khổ
Synonyms: bleak life, dreadful existence, harsh living
Antonyms: comfortable life, pleasant existence, prosperity
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Prisoners often endure a miserable existence.
Difficult Grammar Structures Used
Whereas + contrasting clause
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Some people argue that…, whereas others believe that…
→ Dùng để đối lập hai quan điểm.
👉 Trong khi một số người cho rằng…, thì những người khác tin rằng…By + V-ing (method/result)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: By keeping such criminals behind bars, governments can ensure…
→ Diễn tả cách thức đạt được kết quả.
👉 Bằng cách giam giữ những tên tội phạm này, chính phủ có thể đảm bảo…The prospect of + V-ing
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The prospect of being arrested can discourage potential offenders.
→ Diễn tả viễn cảnh có thể xảy ra trong tương lai.
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IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: …so that law-abiding citizens can live without fear.
→ Diễn tả mục đích.
👉 …để công dân tuân thủ pháp luật có thể sống không sợ hãi.
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