Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 20/9/2023 )
I. Đề bài
Some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.
- Main idea: The delegation of various mechanical tasks to robots is likely to give rise to greater unemployment figures.
- Supporting idea: In the workplace, especially in manufacturing, millions of workers worldwide, particularly unskilled ones, would lose their jobs to cutting-edge robotic systems. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Currently, large numbers of manual workers are being replaced by cutting-edge robotics systems in numerous factories around the world) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "Work" IELTS
- Example:
- For example, fully automated processes have already taken over monotonous jobs such as assembly-line workers or bank tellers in many developed countries such as the United States.
- For instance, thousands of Chinese assembly workers at FoxConn, a major manufacturer of Apple products, have recently been made redundant after the company adopted a fully automated process that minimizes the need for a skilled and unskilled human labor supply. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that robots are very important to humans future developmen & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- They can be very accurate – to fractions of an inch
- Robots can work in environments which are unsafe for humans – in the nuclear or chemical industries for example
- As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
- Main idea 2: In homes, robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
- Supporting idea: Automated robots can complete chores much faster and efficiently than humans, allowing individuals to reclaim precious time for leisure, hobbies, or spending quality time with family and friends.
- Example: Automated vacuum cleaners are a great example of how robots can complete chores faster and more efficiently than humans. Instead of manually vacuuming your floors, you can simply program your robot vacuum cleaner to do it for you. This can free up your time so that you can focus on other things, such as spending time with your loved ones, pursuing your hobbies, or simply relaxing.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.
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