Phân tích "Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It encourages viewers to violate the laws (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: those criminal descriptions wield adverse influence on audience, especially fragile youngsters)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Numerous teenagers tend to follow or replicate infractions presented with detailed procedures, methods and tools mainly because they have great curiosity or they want to make a grand impression by proving that they can be better than the person who committed the original crime. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "procedure" tiếng anh
        • Due to vulnerable mentality and lack of ample experience, upon contacting violent programmes, those kids are tempted to follow suit, thus breaking the law and such juvenile delinquencies are too often to be ignored. 
        • If this trend is out of control, then more teenagers will fall victim to those evil reports.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: numerous would-be criminals can learn skills of committing crimes from similar cases, also the police find it more formidable to crack down on crimes efficiently.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Although the original purpose of crime description is to warn people against offenses and teach them valuable lessons, the fact is that there, indeed, exists a discrepancy between what is desired and what is achieved. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "indeed" 
      • Example: 

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Broadcasting more violations of crimes in combination with their severe punishment plays a pivotal role in eradicating the intention of future offenders >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "broadcast" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The increasing rate of the number of to-be-culprits would be significantly reduced
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: They would have a tendency to prepare for approaches to avoid being victims of wrongdoings. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "report" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: By exemplifying in detail the procedure of a breach, individuals would be more well-aware of the feasibility of a criminal case.
      • Example: 

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