Giải đề"It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh cung cấp Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đối với dạng opinion essay này nếu theo quan điểm TOTALLY AGREE thì có thể bố cục bài dễ nhất như sau:
  • Body 1: develops students' patriotism (giải thích + ví dụ)
  • Body 2: understand their hometown’s traditional values and identity (giải thích + ví dụ)

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is often argued that schoolchildren should focus more on local history rather than world events. I totally agree with this view, as studying the past of their own nation fosters a deep-rooted patriotism (tình yêu nước ăn sâu vào gốc rễ – strong and lasting love for one’s country) and helps them appreciate their cultural identity.

First and foremost, knowledge of local history plays a vital role in developing students’ sense of national pride (niềm tự hào dân tộc – the feeling of being proud of one’s country). By learning about heroic struggles and sacrifices of their ancestors, young learners can feel immensely (cực kỳ – extremely, greatly) grateful for the freedom they enjoy today. Such awareness nurtures a strong civic responsibility (trách nhiệm công dân mạnh mẽ – the duty individuals feel towards their society), encouraging students to contribute to their communities. For example, lessons about independence wars not only keep historical memory alive but also serve as a powerful motivational tool (công cụ truyền cảm hứng mạnh mẽ – something that inspires people greatly) for students to protect and build their homeland.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, understanding local history enables young people to embrace their cultural heritage (di sản văn hóa – the traditions, customs, and artifacts passed down by previous generations) and maintain their collective identity (bản sắc tập thể – the shared sense of belonging within a community). Without this foundation, globalization could easily erode (xói mòn – gradually weaken or destroy) their traditions, leaving them culturally rootless. For instance, learning about traditional festivals or historical landmarks instills pride in local customs and ensures that students act as guardians of tradition (người bảo vệ truyền thống – those who preserve cultural practices). This not only safeguards the uniqueness of their nation but also allows them to share their culture confidently with the wider world.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is far more essential for students to prioritize learning about local history, as it cultivates patriotism and strengthens cultural identity.

New Vocabulary List

1. deep-rooted patriotism – tình yêu nước ăn sâu vào gốc rễ – strong and lasting love for one’s country

   • Synonyms: profound loyalty, steadfast nationalism, unwavering devotion

   • Antonyms: indifference, apathy, disloyalty

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “studying the past of their own nation fosters a deep-rooted patriotism”

2. national pride – niềm tự hào dân tộc – the feeling of being proud of one’s country

   • Synonyms: nationalism, honor, dignity

   • Antonyms: shame, disgrace, humiliation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “knowledge of local history plays a vital role in developing students’ sense of national pride”

3. immensely – cực kỳ – extremely, greatly

   • Synonyms: tremendously, enormously, exceedingly

   • Antonyms: slightly, modestly, marginally

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “young learners can feel immensely grateful for the freedom they enjoy today”

4. strong civic responsibility – trách nhiệm công dân mạnh mẽ – the duty individuals feel towards their society

   • Synonyms: public duty, social obligation, communal accountability

   • Antonyms: irresponsibility, negligence, disregard

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Such awareness nurtures a strong civic responsibility”

5. powerful motivational tool – công cụ truyền cảm hứng mạnh mẽ – something that inspires people greatly

   • Synonyms: driving force, source of inspiration, catalyst

   • Antonyms: discouragement, deterrent, hindrance

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “independence wars… serve as a powerful motivational tool”

6. cultural heritage – di sản văn hóa – the traditions, customs, and artifacts passed down by previous generations

   • Synonyms: legacy, tradition, inheritance

   • Antonyms: modernity, innovation, novelty

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “understanding local history enables young people to embrace their cultural heritage”

7. collective identity – bản sắc tập thể – the shared sense of belonging within a community

   • Synonyms: shared identity, community spirit, social unity

   • Antonyms: individualism, separation, disunity

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “maintain their collective identity”

8. erode – xói mòn – gradually weaken or destroy

   • Synonyms: undermine, weaken, deteriorate

   • Antonyms: strengthen, reinforce, fortify

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “globalization could easily erode their traditions”

9. guardians of tradition – người bảo vệ truyền thống – those who preserve cultural practices

   • Synonyms: custodians, protectors, preservers

   • Antonyms: destroyers, betrayers, neglecters

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “students act as guardians of tradition”

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. By learning about heroic struggles and sacrifices of their ancestors, young learners can feel immensely grateful...
   → By + V-ing clause = diễn tả nguyên nhân/cách thức → “Bằng việc học về những cuộc đấu tranh anh hùng… học sinh có thể cảm thấy biết ơn vô cùng…”

2. Such awareness nurtures a strong civic responsibility, encouraging students to contribute…
   → Present participle phrase (V-ing) used to show result or consequence → “Ý thức đó nuôi dưỡng trách nhiệm công dân mạnh mẽ, và điều này khuyến khích học sinh đóng góp…”

3. Without this foundation, globalization could easily erode their traditions…
   → Conditional clause without If (using “Without”) → “Nếu không có nền tảng này, toàn cầu hóa có thể dễ dàng làm xói mòn truyền thống của họ.”

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