Phân tích & sửa đề"The maps show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007" IELTS WRITING

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Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa đề"The maps show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007" IELTS WRITING

I. Đề bài

The maps show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the change of Pentland from 1980 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall: Pentland was a more residential area after roughly a quarter-century in 2007 while it was an industrial site in 1980
  • Phân thành 2 đoạn thân bài:
    • Body 1: map 1 mô tả từ bao quát đến chi tiết, từ bên phải qua bên trái 
      • Grassland was on the southeast corner, whereas car parking was on the east side  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt However/ Whereas
      • There were perpendicular roads, which divided the region to four parts
      • On the north side was a half-cup shape sea. 
      • The only major establishments in Pentland were industries, which were located towards the west.
    • Body 2: map 2: cũng theo đúng bố cục như đã mô tả ở body 1 để đồng nhất:
      • Houses area took the place of grassland whereas, opposite the road developed cinema
      • Alongside the road, many shops opened—apparently built on the northeast side.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng alongside tiếng anh
      • The sea was later known as yacht marina and surrounded new road developed in the northwest corner new park build. 
      • Car parking shifted below to park, which was multi-storey. Next to it, a swimming pool was created.

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