Bên cạnh Phân tích "Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?" IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The bar chart below shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.

The bar chart below shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business.

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  • Overall:
  • Body 1: Viết về 2 categories có số liệu thấp nhất (Political situation + External factors)
  • Body 2: Viết về 3 categories còn lại

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart illustrates (illustrates – shows clearly – minh họa) the results of a survey investigating what people in Europe and the USA regard as the most important factor in business success.

Overall, both groups considered the type of business (type of business – kind of enterprise – loại hình kinh doanh) the most important, while political situation (political situation – government and political environment – tình hình chính trị) and external factors (external factors – outside influences – các yếu tố bên ngoài) were viewed as the least influential.

Regarding low-priority concerns (low-priority concerns – less important issues – các yếu tố ít được ưu tiên), fewer than 10% of Europeans cited the political situation, with slightly more Americans sharing this opinion. External factors were similarly rated low by respondents from both regions.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Conversely, the type of business was prioritized by over 40% of Americans and around 35% of Europeans. The personality of the director (personality of the director – personal traits of the business leader – tính cách của giám đốc) was considered highly influential by nearly half of Europeans, while less than 30% of Americans agreed. The overall economy was rated more crucial in the USA than in Europe.

New Vocabulary with Synonyms and Antonyms:

1. Illustrates

   • Synonyms: demonstrates, depicts, outlines

   • Antonyms: hides, conceals, obscures

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The bar chart illustrates the results of a survey...

2. Type of business

   • Synonyms: business model, business nature, sector

   • Antonyms: irrelevant factor, external condition, random choice

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: the type of business was prioritized by over 40%...

3. Low-priority concerns

   • Synonyms: secondary factors, minor elements, unimportant issues

   • Antonyms: key issues, main drivers, critical elements

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Regarding low-priority concerns, fewer than 10%...

4. Personality of the director

   • Synonyms: leadership traits, character of the CEO, managerial style

   • Antonyms: company culture, business size, external policy

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The personality of the director was considered...

Difficult grammar structures:

1. Passive voice

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: External factors were similarly rated low...

   • Explanation: This structure shifts focus to the factor, not the people who rated it.

   • Vietnamese: Các yếu tố bên ngoài cũng được đánh giá thấp...

2. Comparative structures

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: more crucial in the USA than in Europe

   • Explanation: Used to compare importance between two regions.

   • Vietnamese: quan trọng hơn ở Mỹ so với châu Âu

3. "Whereas" clause

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ...while political situation and external factors were viewed as the least influential.

   • Explanation: Introduces contrast.

   • Vietnamese: trong khi tình hình chính trị và các yếu tố bên ngoài bị xem là ít ảnh hưởng nhất

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