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The best way to improve children’s life is fathers and mothers attending course for parenting and child development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

hoặc:

The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Parenting courses can provide new parents with valuable insights, strategies, and techniques for raising their children effectively.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These courses often cover a wide range of topics, including child development, communication skills, discipline approaches, and problem-solving methods. 
        • For individuals who have little prior experience with childcare or feel uncertain about parenting, these courses can offer a structured learning environment that boosts their confidence and equips them with practical skills.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Parenting" found that parents who took a parenting course were more likely to use positive parenting techniques, such as praise and encouragement, than parents who did not take a course.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: It provides a platform for building a supportive community and exchanging experiences. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Parenting can often be isolating, especially for first-time parents who might feel overwhelmed by the challenges of raising a child. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Parenting courses offer a space where parents can connect with others who are going through similar experiences, fostering a sense of belonging and shared understanding.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Parenting" found that parents who participated in a parenting course were more likely to feel supported by other parents than parents who did not participate in a course.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

There is a growing belief that the most effective method to enhance children's lives is for fathers and mothers to attend parenting and child development courses. I totally agree with this view because such programs equip parents with essential skills and provide a much-needed support system.

Firstly, attending these courses offers invaluable insights (invaluable insights - English: extremely useful knowledge; Vietnamese: kiến thức cực kỳ quý báu) into effective child-rearing strategies. These well-structured programs (well-structured programs - English: courses designed in an organized and logical way; Vietnamese: các khóa học được thiết kế chặt chẽ) usually cover a wide-ranging curriculum (wide-ranging curriculum - English: a program that includes many different topics; Vietnamese: chương trình học bao quát nhiều chủ đề), including child psychology, effective communication, discipline techniques, and conflict resolution. For first-time parents (first-time parents - English: parents having their first child; Vietnamese: những người lần đầu làm cha mẹ), such knowledge can be a game changer (game changer - English: something that significantly changes a situation; Vietnamese: yếu tố thay đổi cục diện), helping them feel more confident and better equipped to handle various challenges. For example, a study published in the journal Parenting indicated that participants who completed a parenting course were far more likely to employ positive reinforcement methods (positive reinforcement methods - English: techniques encouraging good behavior through praise and rewards; Vietnamese: phương pháp củng cố tích cực) compared to those who did not.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, these courses create a strong support network (strong support network - English: a reliable group offering help and advice; Vietnamese: mạng lưới hỗ trợ vững chắc), which is vital for parents facing the often-overwhelming demands (often-overwhelming demands - English: stressful and difficult responsibilities; Vietnamese: những yêu cầu thường xuyên gây áp lực) of raising children. Parenting can sometimes feel like a lonely journey (lonely journey - English: an experience where one feels isolated; Vietnamese: hành trình đơn độc), especially in today's fast-paced society (fast-paced society - English: a society where things change quickly; Vietnamese: xã hội thay đổi nhanh chóng). Through peer-to-peer discussions (peer-to-peer discussions - English: conversations between people at a similar stage; Vietnamese: cuộc thảo luận giữa những người ngang hàng), parents not only share their experiences but also gain emotional support and practical advice. As confirmed by another study in Parenting, parents who engaged in such courses felt a stronger sense of belonging and were more resilient against common parenting stresses.

In conclusion, participating in parenting and child development courses is undoubtedly one of the most beneficial ways to improve children's lives by empowering parents with critical knowledge and emotional support.

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:

• "Attending these courses offers invaluable insights into effective child-rearing strategies."

• "These well-structured programs usually cover a wide-ranging curriculum, including child psychology, effective communication, discipline techniques, and conflict resolution."

• "Parenting can sometimes feel like a lonely journey, especially in today's fast-paced society."

Synonyms and Antonyms for Selected New Vocab

1. Invaluable Insights

   • Synonyms: precious knowledge, priceless wisdom, critical understanding

   • Antonyms: worthless information, insignificant details, trivial knowledge

2. Game Changer

   • Synonyms: turning point, breakthrough, revolution

   • Antonyms: minor adjustment, negligible shift, insignificant change

3. Strong Support Network

   • Synonyms: reliable community, dependable group, trustworthy circle

   • Antonyms: isolated individual, disconnected person, unsupported entity

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