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I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the qualification of graduates at an engineering company in 1980 and 2008.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The two pie charts illustrate (show clearly - minh họa rõ ràng) the educational qualifications (academic background - trình độ học vấn) of employees at an engineering firm in 1980 and 2008.
Overall, science-based qualifications were consistently dominant (always in the majority - luôn chiếm ưu thế) in both years, while the proportion of employees holding arts-related degrees or PhDs experienced mixed changes.
In 1980, Master’s in Science accounted for the largest share (biggest proportion - tỷ lệ lớn nhất) at 29%, followed closely by First Degree in Arts (25%) and First Degree in Science (19%). Meanwhile, PhD in Science and Master’s in Arts stood at 13% and 12% respectively. The least common qualification (lowest percentage - bằng cấp ít phổ biến nhất) was a PhD in Arts, at just 2%.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
By 2008, the distribution had shifted. The percentage of science qualifications remained relatively stable (unchanged or slightly changed - tương đối ổn định), with PhD in Science increasing slightly to 30%, while Master's in Science remained at 29%. In contrast, First Degree in Science fell to 10%, and PhD in Arts rose notably to 7%. First Degree in Arts and Master’s in Arts saw marginal declines, comprising 11% and 13%, respectively.
🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms
1. Dominant
Synonyms: prevalent, preponderant, prevailing
Antonyms: minor, insignificant, rare
Example: "Science-based qualifications were consistently dominant..."
2. Stable
Synonyms: unchanged, steady, constant
Antonyms: fluctuating, volatile, variable
Example: “the percentage remained relatively stable…”
🧠 Difficult Grammar Structures
Complex sentence with time contrast
"By 2008, the distribution had shifted."
→ Đến năm 2008, cơ cấu đã thay đổi.
Passive voice with present perfect (implied):
"PhD in Arts rose notably to 7%."
→ Bằng tiến sĩ ngành nghệ thuật đã tăng đáng kể lên 7%.
Use of sequencing and adverbials
“followed closely by…, meanwhile…, in contrast…”
→ được theo sau sát sao bởi…, trong khi đó…, ngược lại…
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