Phân tích"The diagram below shows the process of milk production" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

I. Đề bài

The diagram below shows the process of milk production

The diagram below shows the process of milk production

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích


  • Overall:
    • The production of milk follows various stages, from the first stage where cows graze to the final stage where the milk is delivered to customers  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: starting with cows grazing on grass, to the sale of dairy products in supermarkets and shops)
  • Body 1: Từ grazing stage đến milk tanker 
    • Cows are raised on farms in grass fields. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN BIỆT "RISE / RAISE / ARISE" TIẾNG ANH
    • Cows produce milk twice a day with the use of special milking machines
    • Raw milk from cows is then stored in refrigeration facilities to ensure that its best quality is maintained
    • A milk tanker truck is then used to deliver the stored milk to the dairy, on a daily basis (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the milk is put into a tanker and once the milk has been transferred to a tanker, it is then ready to be delivered to the dairy)
  • Body 2: 
    • When the milk has been delivered to the dairy, it is subsequently processed into various dairy products
    • The finished milk is delivered in two ways: 
      • It can be processed once more to produce cheese, cream and butter. 
      • The processed milk from the dairy is automatically pasteurized and packaged on an assembly line. This stage is followed by the delivery of packaged milk to supermarkets and shops where customers normally purchase their milk (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the milk is then put through a pasteurization process, and it is now ready to be packaged). >> IETLS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "stage" tiếng anh

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