Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950"IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- West Park Secondary School contained fewer buildings in 1950 and was located nearer residential and agricultural land >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt CONTAIN / INCLUDE CONSIST/ INVOLVE
- By 2010, several facilities had been added for students and there was the notable addition of a large car park.
- Body 1: Viết về map 1 (Năm 1950)
- In 1950, 3 rows of houses were located to the left of the school
- Just above a large section of farmland and a playground attached to the school. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attach" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về map 2 (Năm 1980)
- By 1980, there were significant alterations related to housing.
- The former houses were replaced by a car park and science block and the farmland was removed in favor of a sports field.
- The playground remained unchanged. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"form"tiếng anh
- Body 3: Viết về map 3 (Năm 2010)
- Over the next 30 years, the car park was expanded towards the south and occupied the sports field.
- The sports field was moved to the east and took a third of the original playground area. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "loose" tiếng anh
- The science block and school building remained unchanged between 1980 and 2010.
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