Phân tích"The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

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  • Overall: 
    • West Park Secondary School contained fewer buildings in 1950 and was located nearer residential and agricultural land  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt CONTAIN / INCLUDE CONSIST/ INVOLVE 
    • By 2010, several facilities had been added for students and there was the notable addition of a large car park.
  • Body 1: Viết về map 1 (Năm 1950)
    • In 1950, 3 rows of houses were located to the left of the school
    • Just above a large section of farmland and a playground attached to the school.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "attach" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Viết về map 2 (Năm 1980)
    • By 1980, there were significant alterations related to housing. 
    • The former houses were replaced by a car park and science block and the farmland was removed in favor of a sports field. 
    • The playground remained unchanged.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"form"tiếng anh
  • Body 3: Viết về map 3 (Năm 2010)
    • Over the next 30 years, the car park was expanded towards the south and occupied the sports field. 
    • The sports field was moved to the east and took a third of the original playground area.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "loose" tiếng anh
    • The science block and school building remained unchanged between 1980 and 2010.

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