Phân tích"The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (computer-based 27/4/2022)

· Đề thi IELTS thật,Task 1

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (computer-based 27/4/2022).

I. Đề bài

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period.

The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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    • Overall:
      • There were only minor fluctuations in the number of rail passengers  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the number of travellers using trains showed an unsteady upward trend)
      • The rate of trains running on time was also erratic, meeting or exceeding the target from 2002 to 2005, and again from 2008 to 2009. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "rate" tiếng anh
    • Body 1: Viết biểu đồ 1
      • In the year 2000, around 38 million people travelled by rail. 
      • The number of rail passengers fluctuated until it reached a peak of almost 50 million passengers in 2005. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "almost" tiếng anh
      • The figure then dropped back down to 40 million in 2008 before rising to around 42 million in 2009.
    • Body 2: Viết biểu đồ 2
      • The frequency at which trains ran on time in the year 2000 was 92%, compared to the expected target of 95%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách dùng in comparison with / compared to/with 
      • The figure then steadily inclined over the next few years to reach 96% in 2004 before falling back down to 92% in 2006. 
      • The figure then quickly increased up to 97% by 2008, and then maintained this level thereafter

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