Phân tích"The graphs below show the average retirement age for men and women in 2004 and 2008 in six different countries" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The graphs below show the average retirement age for men and women in 2004 and 2008 in six different countries

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  • Overall:
    • Retirement ages rose across all countries except Italy for men and France for women during the specified years.
    • Sweden had the highest retirement age for both genders compared to other countries mentioned.
  • Body 1: Viết biểu đồ 1 
    • The average retirement age for men reached its peak in Sweden, climbing from 63 in 2004 to 63.7 in 2008. 
    • Conversely, Italy recorded the lowest average retirement age for men, remaining at just 58 in both years. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • The Netherlands, Sweden, and the UK boasted longer average retirement ages for men, surpassing 61, whereas these figures were below 61 in the other four countries.
  • Body 2:  Viết biểu đồ 2
    • Women mirrored the trend of changing average retirement ages seen in men across the six countries, with Italy being the exception as it experienced a decline to 56 in 2008, one year lower than in 2004.
    • Sweden maintained the highest average retirement ages for women, reaching 62 in 2004 and 63 in 2008.

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