Phân tích "THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PRISON POPULATION IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1911 AND 2001." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 27/5/2023)

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THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PRISON POPULATION IN A EUROPEAN COUNTRY BETWEEN 1911 AND 2001.

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  • Overall:
    • The number of male prisoners exceeded that of female prisoners, and while the male prisoner population increased over time, the female prisoner population decreased.
  • Body 1: BIỂU ĐỒ SỐ 1. 
    • The male prisoner population stood at 25,000 in 1911, decreased to around 20,000 in 1921, and it remained relatively stable at this number until 1951
    • The figure gradually increased to 25,000 after 1981, and experienced a sharp rise to reach a peak of 35,000 in 2001. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"reach"tiếng anh
  • Body 2: BIỂU ĐỒ SỐ 2
    • The second line graph shows a much lower population of female prisoners, peaking at 4,500 in the beginning and exhibiting an overall downward trend. 
    • The number decreased to approximately 3,200 in 1921, dropped further to just over 1,500 in 1961, rose to slightly under 3,000 in 1971, and continuously declined to less than 1,500 prisoners in 2001. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The two line graphs illustrate the numbers of male and female prisoners in a European country over the period from 1911 to 2001.

Overall, the population of male prisoners consistently outnumbered (vượt quá về số lượng – to be more numerous than) that of females. While the former showed a general upward trend, the latter underwent a marked decline (sự suy giảm rõ rệt – a noticeable and significant decrease).>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In 1911, the male prisoner population was 25,000 before falling to 20,000 in 1921, after which it remained relatively stable (tương đối ổn định – staying nearly unchanged) until 1951. From 1981 onwards, the figure increased gradually to 25,000 and then surged (tăng vọt – to rise suddenly and strongly) to a peak of 35,000 in 2001.

By contrast, the female prisoner population started at 4,500 and then displayed a persistent downward trajectory (xu hướng giảm liên tục – a continuous falling pattern). After declining to 3,200 in 1921 and reaching just over 1,500 in 1961, the number briefly rose to nearly 3,000 in 1971, before dropping steadily to under 1,500 in 2001.

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