Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day."IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2015 and present day.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- While the eastern part of the gallery has remained more or less intact over time, the opposite side has undergone significant transformations, with the whole area becoming more accessible for the disabled. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN BIỆT "REMAIN & RETAIN" TIẾNG ANH
- Body 1: Art Gallery, 2015
- Originally, the gallery was designed merely for its exhibition purpose, and visitors could enter the hall through the entrance in the south of the building. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "remains" tiếng anh
- Inside the hall, there was a reception desk to welcome visitors, which led to a staircase in the north end.
- The remaining part simply consisted of functional areas with a set of 3 exhibition rooms on the eastern wing, one large exhibition space together with an office taking up the entire southwestern corner, and a café in the northwest. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách diễn tả & paraphrase "phần còn lại" (remaining) tiếng anh
- Body 2: Art Gallery, present day
- At present, the location has become modernized and versatile, providing more facilities for visitors, especially with the addition of a wheelchair slope right outside the entrance to the west and a lift next to the stairs. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Word form của "remain"
- Another alteration that happened was the relocation of the reception towards the entrance of the gallery.
- To the west, exhibition room 4 was converted into a children’s indoor playground and one smaller room for temporary display while a gallery shop and a vending machine were opened in place of the original gallery office and the cafe. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Các từ / cấu trúc thường được paraphrase IELTS WRITING
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