Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia" IELTS WRITING TASK 1.
I. Đề bài
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- In 1975, men had far better employment conditions than that of female in Freedonia.
- After 20 years, the scenario of employment sectors in Freedonia changes significantly (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The female employment specially improved a lot, and the gap started to decrease / Overall number of job holders in these six sectors increased but male were still predominant in manufacturing and communications sector) >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ
- Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
- In manufacturing sector, there were about 700 men out of 1000 compared to only about 300 female per thousand >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn cách dùng in comparison with / compared to / with
- In ‘wholesale & retain trade’ and ‘public sector (defence), there were more male employees (about 700-900) compared to around 500-700 female >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "public" tiếng anh
- In Finance and banking sector, male were prominent (Nêu số liệu)
- Only sector where the gap between male and female employees was less was in communication sector where around 300 male and 200 female were working >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "sector" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
- Women were almost equal in number in Finance & banking and wholesale and retail trade (Nêu số liệu)