Phân tích"The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023)

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Phân tích"The picture below shows the plan of museum in 1998 and after some changes was made in 2008."IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 23/5/2023)

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  • Body 2: Viết về map 2
    • A restaurant was added in the northeastern corner of the museum.
    • A temporary exhibition room was added in the southwestern corner of the museum.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "addition" tiếng anh
    • A shop and a cloakroom were added in the southwestern corner of the museum.
    • The garden in the center of the museum was expanded and now includes fountains and a cafe seating area.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The maps illustrate how a museum was redeveloped (tái phát triển - improved and changed significantly) between 1998 and 2008.

Overall, the museum underwent a substantial transformation (sự chuyển đổi lớn - a major change in appearance or structure) over the ten-year period. While the permanent exhibition areas remained largely unchanged, several visitor-oriented facilities were added, and the central garden was considerably enhanced.

In 1998, permanent exhibition rooms occupied both sides of the museum. A garden was situated in the center, with a café directly above it. At the southern end, visitors entered through the ticket area, which was flanked by a temporary exhibition room on the left and a shop alongside a WC and a bag-and-coat room on the right.

By 2008, the museum had become far more visitor-friendly (thân thiện với du khách - designed to improve visitors’ experience). A restaurant was constructed in the northwestern corner, while the temporary exhibition room was enlarged on the western side. The former WC was relocated next to the café, and the previous bag-and-coat room was moved to the southwest corner. Most notably, the central garden was upgraded (nâng cấp - improved to a higher standard) with fountains and a café seating area, creating a more amenity-rich (có nhiều tiện ích - containing numerous facilities and services) environment.

New Vocabulary

1. redeveloped (tái phát triển - improved and changed significantly)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The museum was redeveloped between 1998 and 2008."

Synonyms: renovated, reconstructed, modernized
Antonyms: preserved, maintained, retained

2. transformation (sự chuyển đổi lớn - a major change in appearance or structure)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The museum underwent a substantial transformation."

Synonyms: conversion, alteration, overhaul
Antonyms: stability, preservation, continuity

3. visitor-friendly (thân thiện với du khách - designed to improve visitors’ experience)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The museum had become far more visitor-friendly."

Synonyms: user-friendly, accessible, welcoming
Antonyms: inconvenient, inaccessible, unfriendly

4. upgraded (nâng cấp - improved to a higher standard)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "The central garden was upgraded with fountains."

Synonyms: enhanced, improved, modernized
Antonyms: downgraded, worsened, reduced

5. amenity-rich (có nhiều tiện ích - containing numerous facilities and services)

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Creating a more amenity-rich environment."

Synonyms: well-equipped, facility-filled, service-oriented
Antonyms: basic, poorly-equipped, sparse

Vocabulary

• undergo significant changes = trải qua những thay đổi đáng kể
• be converted into = được chuyển đổi thành
• be relocated to = được di dời tới
• be expanded considerably = được mở rộng đáng kể
• occupy the northern/southern section = chiếm khu vực phía bắc/phía nam
• purpose-built facilities = các cơ sở được xây dựng chuyên dụng
• public amenities = tiện ích công cộng
• layout reconfiguration = sự tái bố trí mặt bằng
• visitor-oriented development = sự phát triển hướng đến du khách
• central landscaped area = khu vực cảnh quan trung tâm

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