Phân tích"The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016." IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016

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  • Overall:
    • Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings.
    • Donated food accounted for the majority of the income most of their funding came from  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Donated Food, followed by community contributions)
    • Program services accounted for the most expenditure.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the vast majority of spending was used for operating program services)
  • Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1
    • Donated food provided most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • The other categories were much smaller because community contributions, which were the second largest revenue source, brought in 10.4% of overall income, and this was followed by program revenue, at 2.2%. 
    • Investment income, government grants, and other income were very small sources of revenue, accounting for only 0.8% combined.
  • Body 2: Viết về biểu đồ 2
    • Program services accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95.8%.
    • There were only two other expenditure items, fundraising and management and general, accounting for 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
    • The total amount of income was $53,561,580, which was just enough to cover the expenditures of $53,224,896.

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