Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012." IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Đề thi IELTS 29/4/2023)
I. Đề bài
The plans show the change of a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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- Overall:
- To meet the demands of an expanding number of patrons, the theater underwent a general expansion that included additional amenities.
- Body 1: Viết về map 1
- In 2010, a left-winged storage area, a back media room, and a front auditorium encircled the small central stage.
- The theater could be accessed from the main entrance to the South, through which a cafe could be spotted in the right corner >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
- Opposite the cafe lay a ticket office and administration office to the other side.
- Body 2: Viết về map 2
- Overall:
- A hall was added at the back, enlarging the main stage.
- The auditorium remained the same after two years, but the media center, which included a shower room, and the storage, were moved to the left and right sides of the stage.
- The old admin office and ticket office were replaced with a few restaurants close to the main entrance on the left >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"restaurant"tiếng anh
- The admin office was moved to the furthest left corner of the customer zone, and the ticket booth was put to the right of the front door.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The two maps illustrate the structural transformation (sự chuyển đổi cấu trúc) of a small theater between 2010 and 2012.
Overall, the theater underwent a significant renovation (sự cải tạo) and spatial expansion (sự mở rộng không gian) to accommodate a growing number of visitors, with several new customer-oriented facilities (cơ sở vật chất hướng đến khách hàng) added.
In 2010, the central stage was surrounded by a storage area to the left, a media room behind, and an auditorium in front. The southern main entrance (cổng chính phía nam) led to a café on the right. Opposite this café were a ticket office and an administration office.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?
By 2012, the stage had been enlarged due to the construction of a hall at the rear. While the auditorium remained unchanged, the media room and storage were relocated (được di dời) to the sides of the stage. The former ticket and admin offices were replaced by several restaurants. Meanwhile, the admin office moved to the far-left corner, and the new ticket booth was positioned to the right of the entrance.
🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms
1. Renovation
Synonyms: refurbishment, modernization, reconstruction
Antonyms: deterioration, neglect, decay
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The theater underwent a significant renovation…”
2. Relocated
Synonyms: moved, transferred, shifted
Antonyms: remained, stayed, retained
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The media room and storage were relocated…”
🧠 Difficult Grammar Structures
Passive Voice with Past Perfect Tense
“The media room and storage were relocated to the sides of the stage.”
→ Phòng media và khu lưu trữ đã được chuyển sang hai bên sân khấu.
Complex Sentence with Adverbial Clause of Purpose
“The theater underwent renovation to accommodate a growing number of visitors.”
→ Rạp hát đã được cải tạo để đáp ứng số lượng khách ngày càng tăng.
Use of Present Perfect Passive in Descriptive Context
“Several new customer-oriented facilities have been added.” (implied context)
→ Một số tiện ích mới hướng đến khách hàng đã được bổ sung.
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