🔥Phân tích"The responsibility of preventing and reducing global environmental damage lies in the hands of politicians, and individuals have little impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 2/4/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The responsibility of preventing and reducing global environmental damage lies in the hands of politicians, and individuals have little impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 2/4/2022)

I. Đề bài

The responsibility of preventing and reducing global environmental damage lies in the hands of politicians, and individuals have little impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree?  

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: The change in everyday actions of one ordinary person may have minimal effects, but if millions of individuals spring into actions at the same time   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Writing Vocabulary - Từ vựng Topic Environment
        • Supporting idea: 
          • When a critical mass of people engages in similar actions, it tends to attract more attention and influence others to join in. 
          • This amplification effect can create a ripple effect, leading to a widespread adoption of the desired change.
        • Example: 
          • Citizens in many countries, like the Netherlands, have now shifted towards using bicycles and subway trains for their daily travel instead of cars, which has so far helped reduce a tremendous amount of CO2 released into the air, and improved air quality  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Ideas & Từ vựng topic "global warming" tiếng anh
          • The problem of polluted oceans has also been tackled in many places thanks to groups of young people who voluntarily spend their time cleaning up beaches, or even diving into water to pick up trash
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
      • Main idea: Without the cooperation of every citizen or the support of the surrounding community, law cannot be effectively upheld  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic"Natural Resources"IELTS
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Law enforcement is more successful when it has the trust and collaboration of the community. 
          • Community policing initiatives encourage officers to build positive relationships with residents, making it easier to gather information and address issues.
        • Example: For example, if farmers continue to burn forests for their own purposes, regardless of the government’s regulations, the problem of climate change will never be successfully mitigated. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

While politicians play a crucial role in formulating (creating and putting into place - hình thành, soạn thảo) policies to combat environmental issues, I totally disagree that individuals have minimal impact. In fact, collective individual actions can significantly influence environmental preservation, and without the cooperation of citizens, political regulations alone would be ineffective.

To begin with, the cumulative impact (combined effect over time - tác động tích lũy) of individual actions should not be underestimated. Although the change in everyday habits of a single person may seem insignificant, the ripple effect (a spreading influence or series of consequences caused by a single action - hiệu ứng gợn sóng) triggered when millions of people adopt sustainable practices can be transformative. For instance, citizens in the Netherlands have collectively embraced eco-friendly transportation (transportation methods that are not harmful to the environment - phương tiện giao thông thân thiện với môi trường), such as bicycles and subways, which has led to a substantial reduction in carbon emissions and improved air quality (the state of the air in terms of pollutants - chất lượng không khí được cải thiện). Additionally, grassroots movements (local community-based initiatives - phong trào cơ sở) led by young people to clean up beaches and remove marine debris (rubbish found in oceans and on beaches - rác thải biển) have contributed to less polluted oceans. These examples demonstrate that when individuals act collectively, they can achieve remarkable progress.

Moreover, environmental policies alone are futile (incapable of producing any useful result - vô ích) without the proactive participation (engagement in advance or ahead of time - sự tham gia chủ động) of individuals. Political regulations are only effective if citizens adhere to (comply with or follow - tuân thủ) them. For example, if farmers continue to burn forests for personal gain despite governmental bans, efforts to tackle climate change will be ineffectual (not producing the desired outcome - không hiệu quả). Law enforcement is far more successful when it is community-driven (initiated and supported by the community - được dẫn dắt bởi cộng đồng), as cooperation enhances trust and compliance. Thus, political strategies must be complemented by public cooperation to yield sustainable results.

In conclusion, while politicians are vital in crafting environmental policies (developing strategies and laws - xây dựng chính sách môi trường), individual actions are equally crucial in achieving lasting environmental improvements.

Vocabulary and Explanation:

  1. formulating (creating and putting into place - hình thành, soạn thảo)

    • Synonyms: developing, devising, constructing

    • Antonyms: ignoring, neglecting, abandoning

  2. cumulative impact (combined effect over time - tác động tích lũy)

  3. ripple effect (a spreading influence or series of consequences caused by a single action - hiệu ứng gợn sóng)

    • Synonyms: domino effect, chain reaction, spillover

    • Antonyms: standalone event, independent action, disconnected outcome

  4. eco-friendly transportation (transportation methods that are not harmful to the environment - phương tiện giao thông thân thiện với môi trường)

    • Synonyms: green transport, sustainable transportation, low-emission vehicles

    • Antonyms: polluting vehicles, non-renewable transport, gas-guzzling cars

  5. improved air quality (the state of the air in terms of pollutants - chất lượng không khí được cải thiện)

    • Synonyms: cleaner air, better atmospheric conditions, reduced pollution

    • Antonyms: polluted air, smog, contaminated atmosphere

  6. grassroots movements (local community-based initiatives - phong trào cơ sở)

    • Synonyms: community-led initiatives, local campaigns, citizen-driven movements

    • Antonyms: top-down policies, government-driven plans, bureaucratic decisions

  7. remove marine debris (rubbish found in oceans and on beaches - rác thải biển)

    • Synonyms: clean up ocean waste, eliminate beach litter, collect ocean trash

    • Antonyms: pollute waters, discard waste into the sea, litter beaches

  8. futile (incapable of producing any useful result - vô ích)

    • Synonyms: useless, pointless, ineffective

    • Antonyms: effective, productive, fruitful

  9. proactive participation (engagement in advance or ahead of time - sự tham gia chủ động)

    • Synonyms: engaged involvement, active contribution, hands-on participation

    • Antonyms: passive involvement, disengaged presence, indifference

  10. adhere to (comply with or follow - tuân thủ)

  • Synonyms: comply with, follow, abide by

  • Antonyms: violate, disregard, ignore

  1. ineffectual (not producing the desired outcome - không hiệu quả)

  • Synonyms: ineffective, futile, unsuccessful

  • Antonyms: effective, successful, impactful

  1. community-driven (initiated and supported by the community - được dẫn dắt bởi cộng đồng)

  • Synonyms: locally-led, community-based, grassroots-driven

  • Antonyms: government-led, top-down, bureaucratically managed

  1. crafting environmental policies (developing strategies and laws - xây dựng chính sách môi trường)

  • Synonyms: designing policies, shaping laws, creating regulations

  • Antonyms: abolishing policies, neglecting regulation, ignoring environmental issues

Difficult Grammar Structures:

  1. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:  Although the change in everyday habits of a single person may seem insignificant, the ripple effect triggered when millions of people adopt sustainable practices can be transformative.

    • Mặc dù thay đổi trong thói quen hàng ngày của một người có vẻ không đáng kể, hiệu ứng gợn sóng khi hàng triệu người áp dụng lối sống bền vững có thể mang lại sự thay đổi lớn.

    • Although... may seem..., ... can be... is a complex structure that contrasts perception with reality.

  2. IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:  Political regulations are only effective if citizens adhere to them.

    • Các quy định chính trị chỉ có hiệu quả nếu người dân tuân thủ.

    • ... only... if... introduces a conditional relationship.

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