Phân tích"Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 21/5/2022 & Đề thi 4/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea: This affects what people think is important (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the ubiquity of advertisement is distorting people’s perception on what is important in life)
      • Supporting idea: It makes younger generations become more superficial and only care about owning whatever’s considered popular. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "generation" tiếng anh
      • Example: For instance, many teenagers today might feel pressured to have the latest smartphone models, designer clothing, and trendy accessories in order to fit in and gain social approval, often at the expense of saving money for education or experiences that truly enrich their lives.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising has a negative impact on people’s lives
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With the omnipresent advertisement, it could potentially cause people to do impulsive shopping (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: sometimes we buy what tempts us without the insight of what we need actually) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tempt"
        • People are encouraged by these ads to buy and own more stuff than needed. 
        • One consequence of this indulgence in buying new things is that people are buying more, they are also throwing out more stuff than ever, causing a burden on the environment. 
      • Example: For example, media is flooded with commercials of beauty products, which lures us into buying them, and people, especially women, are crazy about these things and buy them even without consulting their dermatologists. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising helps people become aware of new products and services that may improve their quality of life. 
      • Supporting idea: Advertising can be a source of information on the latest technological innovations that could make people's lives easier and more convenient.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: For example, through advertising, people can learn about new health supplements or medical treatments that could alleviate their ailments. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising can be entertaining and add value to people's lives.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many ads are created with the intention of making people laugh, feel inspired or simply feel good.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Word form của từ "inspire" tiếng anh
        • A well-crafted advertisement can make people smile and forget about their worries, even if it's just for a moment. 
      • Example: For example, a TV commercial for a chocolate bar might feature a funny storyline with adorable characters, which can make viewers smile and feel happy, even if they are going through a stressful day.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

People are constantly exposed to advertising in today’s world, and while some argue that it negatively influences society, I completely disagree with this view. In my opinion, advertising provides valuable information about products and services and can also serve as a source of entertainment.

Firstly, advertising plays a vital role in raising awareness of new goods and services that can enhance people’s lives. It often acts as an informational tool (công cụ cung cấp thông tin – a means of giving knowledge) that keeps consumers updated on the latest technological breakthroughs. For instance, through persuasive campaigns (chiến dịch thuyết phục – marketing activities designed to influence), individuals can discover health supplements or innovative medical treatments that might alleviate (làm giảm bớt – to reduce the severity of something) their health problems. Without advertising, people might remain ignorant of such life-improving solutions, which demonstrates its indispensable role in modern society.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, advertising is not merely about selling products but can also be a form of entertainment that enriches people’s daily experiences. Many commercials are aesthetic creations (tác phẩm mang tính thẩm mỹ – visually or artistically pleasing productions) designed to inspire, amuse, or comfort audiences. A well-crafted (được thiết kế tinh vi – skillfully made with great attention to detail) advertisement can elicit joy and provide a temporary escape from stress. For example, a humorous TV commercial for a chocolate brand with adorable characters (nhân vật dễ thương – cute and loveable figures) can brighten viewers’ moods and make them forget their worries for a while. Therefore, advertisements can bring psychological relief (sự giảm nhẹ tâm lý – a feeling of mental comfort or ease) in addition to promoting products.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that advertising is beneficial as it not only informs people about useful innovations but also contributes positively to their emotional well-being.

🔑 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. informational tool – (công cụ cung cấp thông tin – a means of giving knowledge)

   • Synonyms: educational resource, knowledge medium, communication channel

   • Antonyms: misinformation source, distraction, ignorance tool

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Advertising plays a vital role as an informational tool that keeps consumers updated."

2. persuasive campaigns – (chiến dịch thuyết phục – marketing activities designed to influence)

   • Synonyms: convincing strategies, promotional drives, influential marketing

   • Antonyms: ineffective efforts, weak promotions, unconvincing attempts

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Through persuasive campaigns, individuals can discover health supplements."

3. alleviate – (làm giảm bớt – to reduce the severity of something)

   • Synonyms: ease, relieve, mitigate

   • Antonyms: exacerbate, worsen, intensify

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...medical treatments that might alleviate their health problems."

4. aesthetic creations – (tác phẩm mang tính thẩm mỹ – visually or artistically pleasing productions)

   • Synonyms: artistic works, creative designs, visual masterpieces

   • Antonyms: unappealing productions, unattractive designs, crude works

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Many commercials are aesthetic creations designed to inspire or comfort."

5. well-crafted – (được thiết kế tinh vi – skillfully made with great attention to detail)

   • Synonyms: finely made, skillfully designed, polished

   • Antonyms: poorly made, clumsy, sloppy

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "A well-crafted advertisement can elicit joy."

6. adorable characters – (nhân vật dễ thương – cute and loveable figures)

   • Synonyms: charming figures, lovable icons, delightful mascots

   • Antonyms: detestable figures, annoying characters, unpleasant icons

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "...a humorous TV commercial with adorable characters can brighten viewers’ moods."

7. psychological relief – (sự giảm nhẹ tâm lý – a feeling of mental comfort or ease)

   • Synonyms: emotional comfort, mental ease, stress reduction

   • Antonyms: psychological burden, stress intensification, mental strain

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Advertisements can bring psychological relief in addition to promoting products."

🔎 Difficult Grammar Structures + Vietnamese Translation

1. "while some argue that it negatively influences society, I completely disagree with this view."

   • Cấu trúc: while + clause (contrast)

   • Nghĩa: "Trong khi một số người cho rằng nó ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến xã hội, tôi hoàn toàn không đồng ý với quan điểm này."

2. "Without advertising, people might remain ignorant of such life-improving solutions."

   • Cấu trúc: Without + noun, clause (điều kiện giả định)

   • Nghĩa: "Nếu không có quảng cáo, con người có thể vẫn không biết đến những giải pháp cải thiện cuộc sống như vậy."

3. "Advertising is not merely about selling products but can also be a form of entertainment."

   • Cấu trúc: not merely... but also (nhấn mạnh)

   • Nghĩa: "Quảng cáo không chỉ đơn thuần là bán sản phẩm mà còn có thể là một hình thức giải trí."

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