Phân tích "Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Computer-based 21/5/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE 
    • Main idea: This affects what people think is important (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the ubiquity of advertisement is distorting people’s perception on what is important in life)
      • Supporting idea: It makes younger generations become more superficial and only care about owning whatever’s considered popular. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "generation" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Advertising has a negative impact on people’s lives
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With the omnipresent advertisement, it could potentially cause people to do impulsive shopping (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: sometimes we buy what tempts us without the insight of what we need actually) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "tempt"
        • People are encouraged by these ads to buy and own more stuff than needed. 
        • One consequence of this indulgence in buying new things is that people are buying more, they are also throwing out more stuff than ever, causing a burden on the environment. 
      • Example: For example, media is flooded with commercials of beauty products, which lures us into buying them, and people, especially women, are crazy about these things and buy them even without consulting their dermatologists. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "ESPECIALLY" & "SPECIALLY" tiếng anh

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