🔥Giải đề"In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + vocab

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR Hướng dẫn Giải đề"In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Tham khảo từ vựng topic food IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Để ý bài này đã chia sẵn bố cục 2 đoạn thân bài families and societies
• Đối với dạng opinion essay, cách viết tốt nhất sẽ là theo TOTALLY, trong bài này có thể TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho và theo bố cục sau:
  • Intro câu 2: totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là "In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies"
  • Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho (đoạn 1 này nên viết về families)
    • Có thể nêu main idea là fast food làm mọi người ít nấu traditional foods hơn nên ít quây quần bên mâm cơm với gia đình hơn 
      • Main idea: Traditional foods often hold cultural significance, and the act of preparing and consuming them together fosters a sense of unity and belonging within families. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When fast foods take the place of these traditional meals, the communal aspect of eating is compromised. 
        • Fast food is often consumed on the go or as a solitary activity, leading to a reduction in the time families spend together around the dining table.
      • Example: The Korean tradition of Chuseok, a major autumn harvest festival, exemplifies the importance of family gatherings centered around traditional foods like songpyeon, japchae, and bulgogi, symbolizing a strong connection to heritage and the value of togetherness.
  • Body 2 : nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho (đoạn 1 này nên viết về societies)
    • Có thể nêu main idea là fast food làm mọi người ít ăn các món ăn truyền thống hơn nên có thể làm văn hoá bị lãng quên 
      • Main idea: The widespread adoption of international fast foods may lead to the loss of culinary traditions and regional food practices, eroding cultural diversity.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: Traditional foods are an integral part of a country's cultural identity. 
      • Example: For instance, in India, the proliferation of Western fast-food chains has posed a threat to the country's vibrant culinary landscape. Traditional Indian cuisine, renowned for its intricate spice blends, diverse regional variations, and emphasis on fresh, seasonal ingredients, is facing increasing competition from standardized fast-food offerings.
  • Conclusion: paraphrase intro câu 2 

Bố cục của bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR là đúng tuy nhiên chưa bám sát vào đề bài có gợi ý This is having a negative effect on both families and societies.

In recent decades, traditional cuisines have been gradually supplanted (thay thế hoàn toàn – replaced completely) by international fast food in many parts of the world. I totally agree that this shift is negatively impacting both families and societies.

Firstly, the decline of traditional meals has undermined (làm suy yếu – weakened or damaged) the role of family dining as a bond-strengthening ritual (nghi thức gắn kết – a habitual activity that promotes closeness). In many cultures, preparing and sharing traditional foods is a time-honored custom (phong tục lâu đời – a respected tradition maintained over generations) that reinforces family unity. However, on-the-go (vội vàng – done quickly, without settling down) consumption of fast food often results in family members eating separately and irregularly, diminishing the opportunity for quality bonding time. For instance, during Chuseok in Korea, families come together to prepare and enjoy symbolic dishes like songpyeon and japchae, which serve not just nutritional but emotional and cultural purposes. As these multi-generational practices (thói quen truyền thống của nhiều thế hệ – habits shared by different generations) fade, so too does the fabric of familial cohesion.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Secondly, societies risk losing their cultural identity as fast food erodes culinary heritage. Traditional dishes are often interwoven (gắn liền – closely connected or combined) with historical narratives, local ingredients, and ethnic pride (niềm tự hào dân tộc – a sense of pride in one’s cultural roots). The proliferation (sự lan rộng – rapid spread or increase) of Western fast-food chains poses a threat to this diversity. Take India as an example: the rise of standardized fast food is encroaching upon (lấn chiếm – gradually taking over) local delicacies like masala dosa and dal makhani, which are rich in culinary complexity (sự phức tạp trong ẩm thực – the sophisticated nature of traditional food preparation). If these time-tested recipes (công thức nấu ăn đã được chứng minh qua thời gian – recipes that have stood the test of time) are abandoned, future generations may grow up detached from their cultural roots.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that the growing dominance (sự thống trị ngày càng tăng – increasing control or influence) of fast food is eroding family bonds and cultural identity, making it a profoundly negative development.

🔁 Example Word: "Supplanted"

• Synonyms (replaced, displaced, ousted)

• Antonyms (preserved, maintained, continued)

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Traditional cuisines have been gradually supplanted by international fast food..."

📘 Advanced Grammar Structures Used

1. Reduced relative clause:

   • "Traditional dishes are often interwoven with historical narratives..."
     ➤ → “...which are often interwoven…”
     → Rút gọn mệnh đề quan hệ để làm câu gọn hơn.

2. Inversion for emphasis:

   • "So too does the fabric of familial cohesion."
     ➤ → Đảo ngữ để nhấn mạnh sự mất mát trong sự gắn kết gia đình.

3. Complex noun phrases:

   • "Bond-strengthening ritual", "growing dominance of fast food"
     ➤ → Sử dụng cụm danh từ phức tạp để thể hiện ý tưởng rõ ràng và nâng band điểm.

4. Conditional sentence (implied):

   • "If these time-tested recipes are abandoned, future generations may grow up detached..."
     ➤ → Câu điều kiện loại 1 – giả định cho tương lai gần.

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