Phân tích "We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic:

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: In medical sector, maybe in future the computer operated robot will treat the patient instead of a human doctor.  >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "management" tiếng anh
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    • Main idea 2:  In the near future, one can manage his managerial duty properly from his own home sitting in-front of the computer using different software programmes. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "decision" tiếng anh
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  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Digital communication tools often interferes with the bonding time that people share and thus has a negative influence on interpersonal relationships. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ interfere trong tiếng anh
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        • For example, many teenagers sacrifice real-life socialising time for mobile game playing time, which would be likely to cause friends to drift apart in the long term.
        • There are many real examples of couples on the verge of breaking up because one or both partners have grown overly attached to social network applications on mobile phones, and they find it hard to maintain a sense of intimacy.
    • Main idea 2: Modern communication technology discourages direct communication, and this will enhance invisible distance among people 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because we no longer have to visit others to get updates >> IELTS TUTOR hướng  dẫn Diễn đạt "cập nhật tin tức" tiếng anh
        • The young prefer making friends online rather than mixing themselves in the real world
        • “Virtual” relationships are poor alternative / substitute for real ones
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