Phân tích "Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes. However, some people commit crimes repeatedly. Why do you think this is the case? What do you think might stop these people from committing crimes again." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes. However, some people commit crimes repeatedly. Why do you think this is the case? What do you think might stop these people from committing crimes again." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes. However, some people commit crimes repeatedly. Why do you think this is the case? What do you think might stop these people from committing crimes again.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Some criminals believe that they will not be caught or punished for their crimes, so they continue to do them. 
      • Supporting idea: This is especially true for crimes that are not easily detected, such as drug dealing or fraud.
      • Example:  Eric Frein, a white supremacist who believed the government was corrupt and justified in killing police officers, evaded capture for 48 days before being arrested after a shootout.
    • Main idea 2: Some criminals commit crimes out of desperation, as a way to make money or get food and shelter. 
      • Supporting idea: They may feel that they have no other way to survive, so they resort to crime.
      • Example: A study by the National Institute of Justice found that 74% of inmates in state prisons reported that they committed their crimes to get money.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: It is necessary for the government to improve law enforcement capabilities
      • Supporting idea: This includes increasing the number of police officers, providing them with better training, and giving them the tools they need to investigate crimes.
      • Example: After experiencing a surge in gun violence in 2020, Chicago increased the number of police officers and funding for training and equipment, which resulted in a 30% decrease in homicides in 2021.
    • Main idea 2: Providing them with job training and education programs can help them to get back on their feet and become productive members of society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many ex-offenders have low levels of education and job skills, which makes it difficult for them to find legitimate employment. 
        • Job training and education programs can not only help ex-offenders learn new skills and improve their job prospects, but also give them a sense of purpose and direction, and help them to build a better future for themselves.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: A study by the Rand Corporation found that ex-offenders who participated in job training programs were more likely to be employed and less likely to reoffend than ex-offenders who did not participate in job training programs.

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