Phân tích "Young people are highly influenced by famous people and they look up to them as role models. Is that a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 24/4/2023)

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Young people are highly influenced by famous people and they look up to them as role models. Is that a positive or negative development?

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• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao negative 
    • Main idea: Many celebrities lead unhealthy or immoral lifestyles, which can negatively influence young people >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ"INFLUENCE"tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • This can give young people the impression that such actions are acceptable or even desirable.
      • Some celebrities may behave in a morally questionable manner, such as engaging in infidelity or other unethical practices, which can send the message that such behavior is acceptable or even rewarded in society.
    • Example: For instance, some celebrities have been known to endorse drug and alcohol use, glamorize extreme dieting and cosmetic surgery, and engage in reckless or dangerous behavior. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao negative  
    • Main idea: Young people may prioritize fame and fortune over education and hard work, leading to a lack of ambition and motivation.
    • Supporting idea: This can lead to a generation of young people who are unwilling to work hard and pursue meaningful careers, instead opting for short-term fame and instant gratification.
    • Example: For example, reality TV shows often depict young people becoming famous overnight without any real talent or effort, which can give the impression that success comes easily.

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