Phân tích"Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài viết được sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm “young people should follow the traditions of their society”
    • Main idea 1:  it helps maintain a sense of common identity that is essential for the harmony of a society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Traditions remind people that they are part of a history that denotes their past >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "HISTORY" IELTS
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: by adhering to the accepted practices in their society, the young generation will have a secure foundation for their own future.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Traditions mould who they are today and who they are likely to become, thus retaining unity.
        • Since previous generations were able to flourish in the past, it can be assumed that young people will live just as soundly when they follow established customs instead of having to think about creating their own norms >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "custom" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm “they should be free to behave as individuals” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này.
    • Main idea 1: The youth should freely express themselves in many aspects of life, and social traditions should be no exception >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "express" như danh từ, tính từ, trạng từ & động từ
      • Supporting idea: Since every generation has had a way to make their mark in history, the young people of this day and age also deserve the chance to make use of their energy and youth, instead of being held back by established beliefs.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: some traditions can be rather obsolete or even oppressive in regards to the present context, so there is little point in following them.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For example, Vietnam’s past culture of misogyny and gender imbalance has now been virtually eradicated owing to women’s growing awareness and demands for individual freedom and respect >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "individual" tiếng anh 

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