Phân tích "Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training.
      • Main idea 1: When they migrate to work in other countries, their homeland will encounter a severe brain drain. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng ngoại động từ "encounter" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Professionals have an obligation to serve the people of the nation from where they received / obtained their training because their studies are indirectly funded by the money of local tax payers.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: tertiary education is often subsidized by taxpayers)
        • Supporting idea: The training which is provided to doctors and engineers is extremely expensive, and governments provide it for free or a nominal fee. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The cost of educating students is prohibitive, so if they do not receive government funding, only the wealthy will be able to graduate, limiting the opportunities for potentially brilliant talent. Therefore, alumni owe a duty to repay the society that assisted them)
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: When moving to another locale, they will likely have to ensure their standardization and certification are valid and learn the intricacies of working in another nation.
        • Supporting idea: If people do not like their workplace or the opportunities they have in their own country, it will reflect in the quality of the service they provide. 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Preventing individuals from working in other countries would also considerably impair the sharing of expertise and culture across international borders. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "impair" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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