Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm Phân tích & Sửa đề"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng bài discuss both views nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 là "Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids" có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1"Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork"  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "devote" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Assisting children with their homework is a great way for parents to discover their kids' strengths and weaknesses in their academic learning   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "assist" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: It is really difficult for students, especially primary ones to study on their own >> parents could make a huge difference by assisting and encouraging their child’s schoolwork   
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  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 2"Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids" (là quan điểm mình ủng hộ, nhớ nhấn mạnh ủng hộ quan điểm )  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "allocate" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: 
      • Supporting idea: It can help children to form a strong emotional bonding while competing and cooperating with their family
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Playing sports with children does help both kids and parents to lead a healthy lifestyle    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "lead" tiếng anh
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