Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop" IELTS WRITING
I. Đề bài
Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss bọth views and give your own opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "poverty" "The gap between rich and poor" IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu đồng ý với quan điểm thứ 1 có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop”
- Main idea 1: Economic achievements are associated with greater consumption, mass production as well as over-exploitation of natural resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea 1: To satisfy the ever-increasing demands, the current generation has been depriving the next of oil, coal, metal, wood and so on, which eventually results in resource depletion.
- Example 1:
- Main idea 2: economic growth causes serious water contamination and choking air pollution >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: In order to raise output, farms are using more chemicals in fertilizers, pesticides and herbicides while factories are burning more fossil fuels, releasing more emissions into the surroundings
- Example 2: In some developing countries, lowland rainforests have been cleared and unsustainable agricultural practices introduced to produce cash crops, often for export.
- Main idea 1: Economic achievements are associated with greater consumption, mass production as well as over-exploitation of natural resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger” —> nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea: The more advanced an economic system is, the larger the demand for labour there is and the further hunger is repelled >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SO SÁNH KÉP tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: By providing inhabitants, especially those in lower classes, with employment opportunities, these economic sectors secure people’s living standards and put an end to starvation >> Improving a country’s economic stability and security means enhancing individuals’ long-term financial well-being.
- Example:
- Main idea: The more advanced an economic system is, the larger the demand for labour there is and the further hunger is repelled >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SO SÁNH KÉP tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop”
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