Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop" IELTS WRITING
I. Đề bài
Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss bọth views and give your own opinion
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "poverty" "The gap between rich and poor" IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu đồng ý với quan điểm thứ 1 có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop”
- Main idea 1: Economic achievements are associated with greater consumption, mass production as well as over-exploitation of natural resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea 1: To satisfy the ever-increasing demands, the current generation has been depriving the next of oil, coal, metal, wood and so on, which eventually results in resource depletion.
- Example 1: A real-life example is China’s rapid industrialization, which has driven massive consumption of coal, oil, and metals to support its economic growth. This over-exploitation of resources has resulted in environmental degradation and resource depletion, threatening future generations' access to essential materials.
- Main idea 2: economic growth causes serious water contamination and choking air pollution >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: In order to raise output, farms are using more chemicals in fertilizers, pesticides and herbicides while factories are burning more fossil fuels, releasing more emissions into the surroundings
- Example 2: In some developing countries, lowland rainforests have been cleared and unsustainable agricultural practices introduced to produce cash crops, often for export.
- Main idea 1: Economic achievements are associated with greater consumption, mass production as well as over-exploitation of natural resources. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "associate" tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger” —> nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea: The more advanced an economic system is, the larger the demand for labour there is and the further hunger is repelled >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SO SÁNH KÉP tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: By providing inhabitants, especially those in lower classes, with employment opportunities, these economic sectors secure people’s living standards and put an end to starvation >> Improving a country’s economic stability and security means enhancing individuals’ long-term financial well-being.
- Example: An example of this can be seen in South Korea’s rapid industrialization during the 20th century, which created a large demand for labor in manufacturing and technology. This not only provided employment opportunities for lower-class citizens but also helped to significantly reduce poverty and hunger, improving long-term financial well-being.
- Main idea: The more advanced an economic system is, the larger the demand for labour there is and the further hunger is repelled >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SO SÁNH KÉP tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm 1 “economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop”
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The debate over whether economic growth should continue despite its environmental impacts or stop to preserve the planet remains a divisive issue. While some argue that the relentless pursuit of economic growth is detrimental to the environment, others believe it is the only solution to ending poverty and hunger.
On one hand, economic growth is undoubtedly damaging the environment. As countries seek to expand, they engage in mass production, consume more resources, and exploit natural materials at an unsustainable rate. For example, China’s rapid industrialization has fueled massive consumption of coal, oil, and metals, leading to serious resource depletion and environmental degradation. Additionally, economic growth often contributes to water contamination and air pollution. Factories burn more fossil fuels, and farmers rely heavily on chemicals to boost production. In some developing countries, rainforests have been cleared to grow export crops, further harming the environment.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, economic growth is crucial for eradicating poverty and hunger. A more developed economy creates a higher demand for labor, which translates into job opportunities, especially for those in lower socio-economic classes. This boosts living standards and helps fight hunger. A clear example is South Korea’s industrialization in the 20th century, which generated numerous jobs in sectors such as manufacturing and technology, reducing poverty and improving the financial security of its population.
In conclusion, while economic growth can indeed cause environmental damage, it remains the most viable solution to ending poverty and hunger, making it essential for societal progress.
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