🔥Giải đề"Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects. Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích từ vựng

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Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects. Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• increasing = growing = ever-increasing = further = developing
• business = trade = commerce. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "trade" tiếng anh
• cultural contact = cultural exchange = cross-culture
• between countries = international = worldwide = global = transnational = borderless
• lose = disappear = be assimilated = be overwhelmed
• national identities = national specialities = cultural quintessence
• Inflow of foreign capital only for export purposes: dòng tiền ngoại tệ chỉ cho mục đích xuất khẩu
• Neglect of production in the domestic sector: sự bỏ bê sản xuất trong nước
• Eagerness of adapting to the culture: sự háo hức thích nghi với nền văn hoá
• Cross-culture activities: các hoạt động đa văn hoá. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Multicultural societies IELTS
• Intellectual property: sở hữu trí tuệ

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• BODY 1: Viết về view 2”Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities”
  • Main idea 1: (Viết về the increasing business) Borderless commerce underlines the necessity of an international language, leading to the disappearance of minor dialects on a global scale. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "need" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: The world has become a global village in which people from distinct regions speak the same language
    • Example: The exponential growth of e-commerce, exemplified by online marketplaces like Amazon and Alibaba, underscores the importance of a common language, with English emerging as the lingua franca due to its historical and current dominance in international trade, leading many businesses to conduct transactions and marketing in English to reach a wider audience, even when operating solely within their own countries.
       
  • Main idea 2: (Viết về cultural contact) The dominance of affluent countries’ cultures speeds up the disappearance of others’ cultural specialities (HOẶC: Cultural exchanges can lead to the possibility of losing traditions and customs in local communities)
    • Supporting idea: A large number of individuals in these communities adapt quickly to foreign cultures in the attempts to conform to ideals not of their own, which can have devastating effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "devastate" tiếng anh
    • Example: Vietnamese young generation prefer American and Korean songs, films and TV shows rather than their traditional folksongs, dances and dramatics thanks to the process of integration >> Occident costumes, foods and lifestyles have gradually penetrated into Vietnamese people’s daily life, taking the place of time-honored values.
• BODY 2: Viết về view 1”Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects” —> nêu mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
  • Main idea 1: (Viết về the increasing business) The international trade and business opportunities have helped global citizens to purchase and sell products at a competitive price, which allows them to have far more options nowadays than in the past. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "nowadays" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:
      • When businesses operate on a global scale, they are exposed to competition from various regions. 
      • This competition drives innovation, efficiency, and cost-effectiveness as companies strive to differentiate themselves and attract customers. 
      • As a result, consumers benefit from a wider array of products and services at competitive prices.
  • Main idea 2: (Viết về cultural contact) In the area of flourishing international tourism, a country is given the ability to promote its images in others’ eyes. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Globalization, the tendency in which countries are growingly reciprocal, is a precious and unprecedented opportunity for an inferior culture to be advertised to the outside world. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "inferior"
      • Cultural quintessence including cuisine, costume and festivals can be preserved and brought into play
    • Example: For instance, the growing popularity of South Korean food, driven in part by the Korean Wave (Hallyu), has sparked interest in Korean culture as a whole. Tourists visiting Korea are eager to experience kimchi, bibimbap, and other traditional dishes, gaining a deeper appreciation for Korean culinary traditions.

HOẶC có thể tham khảo ý khác:

• Borrowing from other cultures can be a positive exchange, as it is conducive to gain a mutual respect and understanding for new cultures. Providing that international students have opportunities to learn about other cultures, they are more likely to not only build personal relationships, but also learn about these cultures from a local perspective, from which they can greatly benefit. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"perspective"tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, the increasing cross-border interaction (Giao lưu xuyên biên giới – international engagement) in business and culture has sparked an ongoing debate. While some fear that these exchanges may erode national identities (làm xói mòn bản sắc dân tộc – weaken cultural uniqueness), others, including myself, believe the overall impact is largely beneficial.

On the one hand, critics argue that intensified global trade contributes to the gradual disappearance of local languages and dialects. With borderless commerce (thương mại không biên giới – globalized trade) relying heavily on a lingua franca (ngôn ngữ chung – common language), often English, smaller languages face obsolescence (sự lỗi thời). A case in point is the meteoric rise (sự phát triển nhanh chóng – explosive growth) of global e-commerce giants like Amazon and Alibaba, which operate primarily in English. This pressures even domestic sellers to adopt English to stay competitive. Moreover, the cultural dominance (sự thống trị về văn hóa – prevalence of certain cultures) of affluent nations can overshadow indigenous traditions. For instance, many Vietnamese youths are increasingly drawn to American pop and Korean dramas, gradually forsaking (bỏ rơi) their own traditional music and art forms. In this light, cultural convergence (sự hội tụ văn hóa – blending of global cultures) may accelerate the loss of long-standing customs.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I do believe that enhanced business and cultural links offer tremendous benefits (lợi ích to lớn – significant advantages). Firstly, globalization has revolutionized commerce, enabling consumers worldwide to access diverse goods at competitive prices (giá cả cạnh tranh – affordable rates). International competition fosters innovation and efficiency, ultimately benefiting buyers. Secondly, in terms of culture, flourishing tourism (du lịch phát triển mạnh – booming travel industry) allows countries to showcase their cultural quintessence (tinh hoa văn hóa)—from cuisine to costume. South Korea serves as a compelling example. The Korean Wave has captivated global audiences, drawing millions to experience kimchi, hanbok, and traditional festivals firsthand—thus preserving and promoting its identity on a global scale.

In conclusion, although globalization may pose certain cultural risks, it provides invaluable opportunities for both economic and cultural enrichment.

💡 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. Cross-border interaction: Giao lưu xuyên biên giới (international engagement)

2. Erode national identities: Làm xói mòn bản sắc dân tộc (weaken cultural uniqueness)

3. Borderless commerce: Thương mại không biên giới (globalized trade)

4. Lingua franca: Ngôn ngữ chung (common means of communication between speakers of different languages)

5. Obsolescence: Sự lỗi thời (the state of being outdated or no longer used)

6. Meteoric rise: Sự phát triển nhanh chóng (very rapid growth or success)

7. Cultural dominance: Sự thống trị về văn hóa (when one culture overshadows others)

8. Overshadow indigenous traditions: Che lấp các truyền thống bản địa (make local cultures less visible or important)

9. Forsaking: Bỏ rơi (abandoning or giving up something)

10. Cultural convergence: Sự hội tụ văn hóa (the blending of multiple cultures)

11. Tremendous benefits: Lợi ích to lớn (huge advantages)

12. Revolutionized commerce: Cách mạng hóa thương mại (completely transformed trade)

13. Competitive prices: Giá cả cạnh tranh (affordable pricing driven by market rivalry)

14. Flourishing tourism: Du lịch phát triển mạnh (thriving travel industry)

15. Showcase their cultural quintessence: Phô bày tinh hoa văn hóa (display cultural excellence)

📘 Synonyms & Antonyms (for “Cultural Dominance”)

• Synonyms: cultural supremacy, cultural hegemony, cultural influence

• Antonyms: cultural diversity, cultural autonomy, cultural preservation

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The cultural dominance of affluent nations can overshadow indigenous traditions.”

🔍 Difficult Grammar Structures Explained with Vietnamese Translation

1. "While some fear that these exchanges may erode national identities, others, including myself, believe..."
   → Mặc dù một số người lo ngại rằng sự trao đổi này có thể làm mai một bản sắc dân tộc, những người khác, bao gồm cả tôi, tin rằng...

→ Complex sentence with concessive clause using “while”

1. "A case in point is the meteoric rise of global e-commerce giants like Amazon and Alibaba..."
   → Một ví dụ điển hình là sự phát triển nhanh chóng của các ông lớn thương mại điện tử toàn cầu như Amazon và Alibaba...

→ Cleft sentence (emphasis using “a case in point is…”)

1. "In this light, cultural convergence may accelerate the loss of long-standing customs."
   → Theo cách nhìn này, sự hội tụ văn hóa có thể làm gia tăng sự mai một của các phong tục lâu đời.

→ Use of formal idiomatic phrase “in this light”

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