Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!
I. Đề bài
Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
II. Từ vựng
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng & Ideas topic "charity" IELTS
III. Phân tích
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IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Nếu ủng hộ quan điểm số 2 thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm số 1 "charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country"
- Main idea 1: Their resources come from local people, and when this money is utilized for the benefit of the local, it is fully justified >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"utilize"tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: This is because it reinforces a sense of solidarity and addresses immediate needs within the same community
- Example: Food banks collect food donations from individuals, businesses, and organizations, and then distribute that food to people in need. This helps to ensure that everyone in the community has access to healthy food, regardless of their income.
- Main idea 2: Many charitable organizations have limited resources, meaning that if they attempt to do this, they will only antagonize the local community that funds their initiatives. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ"resource" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Many charitable organizations have limited resources because they rely on donations from individuals, businesses, and foundations.
- These donations can be unpredictable, and they can fluctuate depending on the economy, natural disasters, and other factors.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: Their resources come from local people, and when this money is utilized for the benefit of the local, it is fully justified >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"utilize"tiếng anh
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm số 2 & nhấn mạnh mình ủng hộ quan điểm này"these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live"
- Main idea 1: It will help in building harmonious relations between nations >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "relation" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- When charitable organizations provide aid to people in need, it shows that they have compassion and understanding for the challenges that people face.
- This can help to build goodwill and understanding between different nations.
- Example:
- Oxfam has provided food and water to people in need in many countries, including Sudan, Ethiopia, and Haiti. This has helped to improve the lives of millions of people and has built goodwill between the countries where Oxfam has worked.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- UNICEF has provided education and healthcare to children in many developing countries. This has helped to improve the lives of millions of children and has built a sense of shared humanity between people from different nations.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: By providing aid, these organizations can expand their wings towards the most needed ones. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: When charitable organizations provide aid to people in need in different countries, they are able to reach a wider audience and help more people)
- Supporting idea: This is important because there are many people in need all over the world, and charitable organizations can only do so much if they only focus on their own country.
- Main idea 1: It will help in building harmonious relations between nations >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "relation" tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
It is argued that charitable organizations should prioritize domestic beneficiaries, while others contend that assistance ought to be delivered to those in severe hardship regardless of national borders. Although both perspectives have merit, I am firmly convinced that humanitarian aid should be allocated based on urgency rather than geography.
On the one hand, proponents of a nation-first approach assert that charities are primarily funded by local taxpayers and donors; therefore, it is entirely reasonable that these funds be utilized (sử dụng một cách hiệu quả – to use something effectively for a specific purpose) to address pressing domestic concerns. Channeling donations into community-based programmes can strengthen social cohesion and cultivate a sense of shared responsibility. For instance, food banks often collect contributions from households and businesses before distributing them to low-income families within the same city, thereby ensuring food security at a grassroots level. Moreover, many non-profit organizations operate with finite resources (nguồn lực – available assets such as money, time or manpower) and are heavily dependent on unpredictable donations. During economic downturns or natural disasters, funding streams may fluctuate considerably, and if charities divert support abroad, they risk alienating local sponsors who expect tangible benefits for their own communities.
On the other hand, restricting aid to national boundaries may undermine the fundamental mission of philanthropy. Delivering relief internationally can foster long-term diplomatic relations (mối quan hệ – the way in which two or more groups or countries interact) and nurture cross-cultural solidarity. Organizations such as Oxfam and UNICEF have implemented large-scale humanitarian campaigns in countries affected by famine, conflict, and epidemics, thereby enhancing global goodwill and promoting a sense of shared humanity. Furthermore, by broadening their outreach, charities can extend their global footprint and reach marginalized populations in war-torn or poverty-stricken regions. In an increasingly interconnected world, a borderless, needs-based approach ensures that life-saving assistance is directed to those in the most desperate circumstances, regardless of nationality.
In conclusion, while prioritizing domestic support is understandable, I believe charitable organizations should adopt a global outlook and allocate aid according to the severity of need rather than national origin.
New Vocabulary List
utilized (sử dụng một cách hiệu quả – to use something effectively for a specific purpose)
Synonyms: employed, applied, deployed
Antonyms: wasted, neglected, misused
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: funds be utilized to address pressing domestic concerns.resources (nguồn lực – available assets such as money, time or manpower)
Synonyms: assets, capital, supplies
Antonyms: scarcity, shortage, deficiency
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: operate with finite resources.relations (mối quan hệ – the way in which two or more groups or countries interact)
Synonyms: ties, connections, associations
Antonyms: conflict, hostility, discord
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: foster long-term diplomatic relations.grassroots (thuộc cấp cơ sở – relating to ordinary people at a local level)
Synonyms: community-based, local, civic
Antonyms: elite, centralized, top-down
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: ensuring food security at a grassroots level.marginalized (bị gạt ra bên lề xã hội – treated as insignificant or excluded)
Synonyms: excluded, disadvantaged, oppressed
Antonyms: privileged, included, empowered
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: reach marginalized populations in war-torn regions.interconnected (liên kết chặt chẽ – mutually connected or interdependent)
Synonyms: interrelated, integrated, linked
Antonyms: isolated, detached, independent
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: In an increasingly interconnected world.
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