Phân tích & sửa đề"Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 2 về Relocating Business to Regional Areas (kèm bài sửa của học sinh đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ Phân tích & sửa đề"Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đối với dạng outweigh nếu theo hướng TOTALLY (advantages > disadvantages) có thể phân bố bố cục như sau:
  • Intro câu 2: nêu ý kiến advantages > disadvantages
  • Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages có thể triển khai:
    • Main idea: international student exchange giúp cải thiện các kĩ năng xã hội quốc tế (They can develop their social skills by sharing their experiences with other exchange students and get a deeper insight into the culture by immersing themselves in the local community)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & ideas topic "Student exchange program" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: Because of their broader perspective and their exposure to international communities, they are sought after by companies that operate in different parts of the world (có thể nêu 1 nửa câu phản lại để không bị bắt bẻ là chưa nói về disadvantages: không phủ nhận international student exchange có thể làm học sinh bị culture shock lúc ban đầu nhưng nếu trẻ được chuẩn bị & huấn luyện tốt trước khi tham gia exchange sẽ nhanh chóng vượt qua)
    • Example: 
  • Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages có thể triển khai:
    • Main idea: international student exchange giúp học sinh tự lập hơn (It is not uncommon for Vietnamese parents to take decisions on their children’s behalf even after they turn adults)
    • Supporting idea: Without daily support from their parents, these students have to learn to cook, clean, manage their budgets and make their own decisions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "support" tiếng anh
    • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Some educators argue that participating in international student exchange schemes brings significant benefits to adolescents. I strongly believe that the advantages far outweigh the drawbacks of such initiatives.

The first reason why student exchange is immensely beneficial is that it helps young learners cultivate cross-cultural competence (năng lực liên văn hoá – the ability to understand, communicate, and work with people from different cultures). By living abroad, students have countless opportunities to enhance their interpersonal skills (kỹ năng giao tiếp – abilities that help people interact effectively) through constant interaction with host families and peers. Although it is undeniable that some students may initially suffer from culture shock (sốc văn hoá – feelings of disorientation when exposed to an unfamiliar culture), with proper pre-departure training (chuẩn bị trước khi đi – preparation provided before joining a program), this challenge can be overcome swiftly. Furthermore, thanks to their broadened worldview and exposure to multinational environments (môi trường đa quốc gia – settings involving people from multiple nations), these students become highly attractive to global employers, a long-term advantage (lợi ích lâu dài – benefit that continues into the future) that easily eclipses the short-term discomforts.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

Another compelling reason is that exchange programs foster self-reliance (sự tự lập – ability to depend on oneself), which is often lacking in many Asian contexts. In Vietnam, for instance, it is not uncommon for parents to make important decisions even after their children reach adulthood. However, exchange students must take full responsibility for their daily lives abroad: they learn how to cook, budget, clean, and make independent decisions. These life-changing experiences (trải nghiệm thay đổi cuộc sống – events that strongly affect someone’s character or future) transform them into more mature individuals (người trưởng thành – people who behave responsibly) and prepare them better for adulthood than those who never leave their comfort zones.

In conclusion, while short-term difficulties like cultural adjustment exist, the profound gains in cultural awareness, employability, and independence prove that international student exchange programs bring advantages that overwhelmingly outweigh the disadvantages.

Vocabulary List

1. cross-cultural competence (năng lực liên văn hoá)

   • Synonyms: intercultural skills, cultural awareness, global fluency

   • Antonyms: cultural ignorance, ethnocentrism, parochialism

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “it helps young learners cultivate cross-cultural competence.”

2. interpersonal skills (kỹ năng giao tiếp)

   • Synonyms: communication skills, people skills, social skills

   • Antonyms: social awkwardness, poor communication, isolation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “students have countless opportunities to enhance their interpersonal skills.”

3. culture shock (sốc văn hoá)

   • Synonyms: cultural disorientation, adjustment stress, adaptation difficulty

   • Antonyms: cultural familiarity, comfort zone, smooth adaptation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “students may initially suffer from culture shock.”

4. pre-departure training (chuẩn bị trước khi đi)

   • Synonyms: orientation program, pre-travel preparation, induction course

   • Antonyms: lack of preparation, untrained departure, unready start

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “with proper pre-departure training, this challenge can be overcome.”

5. multinational environments (môi trường đa quốc gia)

   • Synonyms: global workplaces, international settings, cross-border contexts

   • Antonyms: domestic environment, local setting, national workplace

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “thanks to their broadened worldview and exposure to multinational environments.”

6. long-term advantage (lợi ích lâu dài)

   • Synonyms: lasting benefit, enduring gain, permanent edge

   • Antonyms: short-term drawback, temporary setback, fleeting issue>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “a long-term advantage that easily eclipses the short-term discomforts.”

7. self-reliance (sự tự lập)

   • Synonyms: independence, autonomy, self-sufficiency

   • Antonyms: dependence, reliance, helplessness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “exchange programs foster self-reliance.”

8. life-changing experiences (trải nghiệm thay đổi cuộc sống)

   • Synonyms: transformative events, eye-opening experiences, defining moments

   • Antonyms: ordinary events, routine experiences, uneventful moments

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “These life-changing experiences transform them into more mature individuals.”

9. mature individuals (người trưởng thành)

   • Synonyms: responsible adults, grown-ups, sensible persons

   • Antonyms: immature people, childish individuals, irresponsible persons

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “transform them into more mature individuals.”

Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Although it is undeniable that …, with proper training, this challenge can be overcome.

   • Type: Concessive clause + main clause

   • Vietnamese: Mặc dù không thể phủ nhận rằng …, nhưng với sự chuẩn bị thích hợp, thử thách này có thể vượt qua.

   • Simplified: Some students may face culture shock, but training can help them overcome it.

2. thanks to their broadened worldview and exposure to multinational environments, these students become highly attractive to global employers

   • Type: Cause-effect complex sentence

   • Vietnamese: Nhờ vào tầm nhìn rộng hơn và sự tiếp xúc với môi trường đa quốc gia, những học sinh này trở nên hấp dẫn với nhà tuyển dụng toàn cầu.

   • Simplified: They see the world more broadly, so companies want to hire them.

3. while short-term difficulties like cultural adjustment exist, the profound gains … prove that international student exchange brings advantages that outweigh the disadvantages.

   • Type: Concessive complex sentence

   • Vietnamese: Trong khi vẫn tồn tại những khó khăn ngắn hạn như thích nghi văn hoá, những lợi ích sâu sắc … chứng minh rằng lợi ích vượt xa bất lợi.

   • Simplified: There are some short-term problems, but the benefits are greater.

Bài viết được sửa kĩ càng của bạn học sinh lớp 7.0 IELTS WRITING ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR, có thể download xuống để tham khảo kĩ nhé

📩 MN AI CHƯA CÓ ĐÁP ÁN FORECAST QUÝ MỚI PART 1-2-3 NHẮN ZL 0905834420 IELTS TUTOR GỬI FREE HẾT NHA

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0 - Đảm bảo đầu ra - Thi không đạt, học lại FREE

>> IELTS Intensive Writing

>> IELTS Intensive Speaking

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc

>> IELTS General

>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày.