Phân tích "Some people think that the range of technology available to individual increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. But others think it imposes an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinions." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the range of technology available to individual increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. But others think it imposes an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinions." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that the range of technology available to individual increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. But others think it imposes an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the range of technology available to individual increasing the gap between rich people and poor people
    • Main idea 1: The cost of accessing advanced technology can be prohibitive for lower-income individuals. 
      • Supporting idea: As technology evolves, those who cannot afford the latest devices or access to high-speed internet might lag behind in acquiring new skills and opportunities.
      • Example: 
        • Students who cannot afford laptops or tablets may have difficulty keeping up with their studies, as more and more coursework is being digitized.
        • Job seekers who do not have access to high-speed internet may have difficulty applying for jobs online or participating in video interviews.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: The rapid pace of technological advancement might outpace the ability of some individuals to acquire necessary skills. 
      • Supporting idea: This can lead to a growing divide between those who are tech-savvy and those who are not.
      • Example: As technology changes the way we learn, teachers may need to learn new skills in order to keep their jobs. For example, they may need to learn how to use technology to create interactive lessons. However, if they are unable to learn these new skills, they may be forced to retire early.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm But others think it imposes an opposite effect. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Technology provides access to information, education, and resources that were previously unavailable to many. 
      • Supporting idea: Online learning platforms, for instance, enable individuals to acquire new skills regardless of their geographical location or socioeconomic background.
      • Example: A refugee in Greece can take an online course to learn English. This could help them find a job and integrate into their new community.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Technology has lowered barriers to entry for entrepreneurship. 
      • Supporting idea: Startups and online platforms allow individuals from all backgrounds to create and market their products and services, leveling the playing field.
      • Example: A small business owner in rural India can use an online platform like Amazon to sell their products. This would allow them to reach a wider audience and grow their business.

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