Phân tích"The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015."IELTS WRITING TASK 1

I. Đề bài

The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015.

The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010, 2015.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall:
    • the instruments in the study were being learnt by far more students in 2015 than in the previous years, with the exception of the violin  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: an increasing percentage of schoolchildren took up the guitar, piano and drum while fewer of them opted for the violin) >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "exclusion" tiếng anh
    • the guitar and the piano remained the most popular instruments to learn in all surveyed years.
  • Body 1: Viết về những số liệu tăng nổi bật (Piano & Guitar)
    • In 2005, approximately 11% of school children were learning to play the guitar & the piano
    • By 2010, the guitar and piano had almost doubled in popularity, with about 20% and 18% of students learning to play them  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "DOUBLE" tiếng anh
    • In 2015, the percentage of school children learning the guitar saw an increase of approximately 10%
    • In 2015, the percentage at of piano learners reached approximately 40%. 
  • Body 2: Viết về những số liệu tăng ít & giảm (Drums & Violin)
    • In 2005, only 5% of students were learning to play the drums  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "play" tiếng anh
    • In 2010, the proportion of school kids learning to play the drums stayed the same 
    • The percentage of those learning the violin decreased marginally from …% in 2005 to…in 2010
    • In 2015, although the percentage of children learning the drums increased slightly to 8%, there was a moderate decrease in the figures for the violin, at only 5%.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Giải thích idiom: "play with fire"

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