Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa bài"The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities" IELTS WRITING TASK 1
I. Đề bài
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Bài này chia quá khứ lí do nằm ở "in the last 4 weeks"
- Overall:
- Đi đến coffee shop là nhiều nhất (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: going to a cafe to have coffee or tea was the most common habit, except in Adelaide HOẶC: in all cities the highest percentage of people went to a café or restaurant to buy a tea or coffee in the last 4 weeks, with the exception of Adelaide where slightly more people had bought instant coffee)
- Số liệu của Melbourn, Sydney khá tương đồng nhau
- Body 1: Mô tả số liệu Melbourn, Sydney (In terms of Sydney and Melbourne)
- Mô tả số liệu “went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks” của 2 thành phố (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: While the percentage of Sydney’s people drinking tea or coffee at a cafe was about 61%, the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at around 63%)
- Mô tả số liệu 2 categories còn lại (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Above 45% of citizens in Sydney and Melbourne had a habit of buying instant coffee, whereas the proportions of those purchasing fresh coffee in these two cities were around 44% and 43% respectively) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase "ACCOUNT FOR" & "HAVE" (Chiếm) IELTS
- Body 2: Mô tả số liệu 3 thành phố còn lại (Moving on to the remaining cities)
- Mô tả số liệu “went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks” (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Having coffee or tea at a cafe accounted for the largest percentage of people in Hobart, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide, at approximately 51% and 49% respectively)
- Mô tả số liệu 2 categories còn lại: IELTS TUTOR lưu ý nếu bài quá số chữ viết không kịp giờ có thể chọn 1 trong 2 category để đề cập
- Around 53% of people in Brisbane and Hobart chose to buy instant coffee, compared to nearly 50% of those in Adelaide. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Paraphrase từ "buy" tiếng anh
- A close similarity can be seen in the percentage of people buying fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide, at around 34% while Hobart’s figure was higher, at roughly 38%.
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The bar chart compares coffee and tea consumption patterns (thói quen tiêu thụ – regular habits of buying or drinking a product) across five Australian cities over the last four weeks.
Overall, going to a café to have coffee or tea was the predominant habit (thói quen chủ đạo – the most common or important habit) in most cities, except Adelaide where instant coffee purchases slightly surpassed café visits. Sydney and Melbourne exhibited remarkably comparable trends (xu hướng tương đồng – similar tendencies or movements).
In Sydney and Melbourne, around 61% and 63% of residents respectively drank coffee or tea at cafés. Over 45% in both cities opted for instant coffee, whereas fresh coffee purchases stood at approximately 44% and 43%.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Moving on to the remaining cities, having beverages at cafés accounted for the highest proportions in Hobart (over 51%), Brisbane (nearly 50%), and Adelaide (49%). Instant coffee was most favored in Brisbane and Hobart (about 53%), while fresh coffee purchases were lowest in Brisbane and Adelaide (34%) but slightly higher in Hobart (38%).
New Vocabulary List
Consumption patterns – thói quen tiêu thụ
Synonyms: usage habits, buying behavior, spending trends
Antonyms: production patterns, supply trends, manufacturing habits
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The bar chart compares coffee and tea consumption patterns across five Australian cities.
Predominant habit – thói quen chủ đạo
Synonyms: main habit, prevailing practice, leading tendency
Antonyms: minor habit, occasional practice, rare tendency
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Going to a café to have coffee or tea was the predominant habit in most cities.
Comparable trends – xu hướng tương đồng
Synonyms: similar patterns, parallel tendencies, alike developments
Antonyms: different trends, contrasting patterns, divergent movements
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Sydney and Melbourne exhibited remarkably comparable trends.
Difficult Grammar Structures
Exception clause – except Adelaide where instant coffee purchases slightly surpassed café visits
→ ngoại trừ Adelaide, nơi lượng mua cà phê hòa tan hơi vượt số lượt đến quán cà phê
Reduced relative clause – Sydney and Melbourne exhibited remarkably comparable trends (reduced from which were remarkably comparable trends)
→ Sydney và Melbourne thể hiện những xu hướng tương đồng đáng kể
Whereas clause for contrast – Over 45% in both cities opted for instant coffee, whereas fresh coffee purchases stood at approximately 44% and 43%
→ Hơn 45% ở cả hai thành phố chọn cà phê hòa tan, trong khi lượng cà phê tươi đạt khoảng 44% và 43%
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