Phân tích "The table below presents the food consumption per person weekly in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 20/8/2022 computer-based)

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The table below presents the food consumption per person weekly in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Overall:
    • Vegetables were consistently the most consumed kind of food in the three years while the opposite was true for cheese. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: vegetables were consumed the most in a person’s diet HOẶC: vegetables made up the largest part of people’s diets in all three years, while cheese made up the smallest portion of people’s food intake)
    • Apart from meat, all the food types were eaten slightly more by people in the latest year. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This was the only food type people in the mentioned country eaten less over the three decades HOẶC: meat consumption decreased, whereas those of other foods saw a climb)
  • Body 1: Các số liệu tăng (vegetables, wheat, bean)
    • Vegetables:
      • Vegetables were always the favorite food consumed every week in 1992, 2002, and 2012 at 2140 grams, 2190 grams, and 2220 grams, respectively. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: 2140 grams were included on a weekly basis in a person’s diet in 1992, which was followed by a steady rise to 2220 grams in 2012) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "basis" tiếng anh 
    • Wheat + Bean:
      • People ate 827 grams of wheat and 532 grams of bean on a weekly basis in 1992. The figure for wheat increased to 997 grams while that for bean went up moderately to 590 grams in 2012. 
  • Body 2: Số liệu giảm & đứng yên (meat, cheese)
    • Meat:
      • Being the second most consumed food in 1992 at 1148 grams per week, meat witnessed an increase to 1211 grams in 2002 before dropping to the lowest point of 1132 grams. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This amount grew slightly to 1211 grams per week and thereafter, dropped back to 1132 grams)
    • Cheese:
      • Cheese made up the smallest part of people’s diet with only 113 grams in 1992 and 125 grams in both 2002 and 2012. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "diet" tiếng anh 

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