PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

· Writing

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ"The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 từng bước phân tích để nắm cách chia bố cục cũng như viết bài không sai task response nhé!

I. Đề bài

The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010

The maps show the changes in the village of Wells-on-the-Water in the UK between 1985 and 2010

II. Từ vựng

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic "Map / Get lost"

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Overall
    • The village has transformed to a small town during this period (HOẶC: Wells-on-the-Water developed from a small, agricultural village to a larger and more commercial settlement)
    • All of the construction seriously reduced the amount of farmland around the village. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "construct" tiếng anh
  • Body 1: Map 1985
    • The village, which is on the banks of the River Wells, was scarcely inhabited in 1985. 
    • The two landmark buildings were the Mansion House at the centre with Mansion garden at its north and an old factory at its west. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "modern building" IELTS
    • These two were accessed with two roads, namely The Woods Drive and the Mansion Lane. 
    • A farm house and a post office were also there along the southern side of the Mansion lane.
  • Body 2: Map 2010 
    • Mô tả từ trên xuống dưới, ngoài vào trong:
      • The most notable development was that the forest north of Woods Drive was cleared and replaced with a new commercial area.  
      • A new access road, Queen’s Drive, was constructed which connected Woods Drive to the area north east of the village. 
      • In the south of the village, Mansion Lane was extended and a bridge was built allowing access across the river. New houses were constructed on both sides of Mansion Lane. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic "bridge" (Cây cầu) IELTS
    • Mô tả chi tiết phía trong 
      • By 2010, the mansion had been converted into a care home. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "convert" tiếng anh
      • Mansion Gardens remained unchanged throughout the period.
      • The old factory was converted into luxury flats.  
      • The old farm house and the post office at the western end of Mansion Lane were demolished and replaced with a park. 

IV. Sửa bài viết HS IELTS TUTOR

Bài viết được sửa kĩ càng của bạn học sinh lớp IELTS WRITING ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR, có thể download xuống để tham khảo kĩ nhé

Bạn học sinh đi thi xuất sắc đạt 7.0 writing & 8.0 overall nhé

Bài viết được sửa kĩ càng của bạn học sinh lớp IELTS WRITING ONLINE 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR, có thể download xuống để tham khảo kĩ nhé

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0

>> IELTS Intensive Writing - Sửa bài chi tiết

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc